Dovina
replying on I Love You Mildred Rogers No Matter What by cat
3 Aug 2004, 10:06 AM
You don't like glasses because they let you see too much.
Of course.
may I take a shot?
I'd like to see the rythm a bit smoother. I like this.
The only way to "kill" a dead man is by sending him to Hell for an eternity of time!
Thanks!
You intrigue me, feline. Some help.
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?i
Thanks, Cat. Thanks for the nice compliment!
I understand....and thanks again.
Thanks for the rec.
Life is not funny!
Thanks for the compliment........scumbag!
Hell is no way out.....It is not deliverance!
No.
"A lot" is 2 words, and L3 is 4 sylables.
Boo!
some deleted user
on haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY
3 Aug 2004, 7:52 AM
Funny, jackass. Is that iambic pentameter? 9.
No, you really suck ass. Really.
I totally feel you here, but you know I thought it was about a parent...you are funny. Your poems are very direct.
Since you are 16 I like this, because I appreciate the feelings it give me, I like that you can look at things that happen in life (even the stuff that's bad, but isn't it all about perspective) with a sense of humour...some people are 35 and don't get that.