Love it! Especially the use of sequential numbers as an introduction. Concise, abrupt and blount, but I still have that clear image of a tired commuter waiting for a train. What is the commute good for if not to let us dwell on our own depression? Only small critique is that "But in of itself" is a little confusing. Still though, great.

The poem makes you (the writer) come off as arrogant. I like the image of the tiny ray keeping away the darkness, but "Led me find myself" doesn't really work grammatically and sounds awkward when spoken. You may want to either change it to "Led me to find myself" or "Let me find myself." It just depends on what you want to project.

The first 5 lines are good. Could end it right there.

I-miss-you poems are very common. They can be good if free from the usual cliches and having something more than the usual that this has.

One of the better synopses of a mushroom trip that I've seen. Agreed about the last stanza though. Maybe a little too conversational to blend with the rest of the work. You do have some good imagery there, and it would be a shame to waste it, so maybe just try and incorporate it with the rhythm of previous stanzas.

is he dead, in the ground -- and she has to dig him up? a poem about euthanasia, or a failed relationship.

A nice sentiment and appreciated I am sure by the ones it is for, but a bit too simplistic for posting here. You will probably not appreciate the response.

A nicely crafted picture. Line breaks at the changes of scene seem appropriate. No period after "But if he is still the man." The title is not exactly a butler inviting me into the parlor.

Sounds like you believe in darn near everything. I like the cadance, except for the last verse, which I wonder why you include.

a modern skillet, dripping with fried pimples

Wow. Best phrase-"propheteering ministers."

A modern kind of "I sing the Body Electric." I like it.

Did you want this to be just a bit pimply? Scary,fun.