Dovina
on blobby sums +-*/ by MR Blobby
2 Jul 2004, 1:06 PM
Answer 1: 77
Answer 2: 70
Science is a great poetic topic, almost as mysterious and wonderful as love. Good reply to Zodiac, I'm anxious to see his response.
Life is fatal.
Blobby blobby blob..?
Zank you verry mutchen keepen read ing the limericks
You know, I think you nailed it.
Today, I feel like a baby infant.
Sounds like a baby infant. Blessed with eight.
An enjoyable read. Blessed with nine.
I don't think I've felt this way before, either. It's rather disconcerting. I actually really don't mean awestruck in that manner. No awe is involved.
I suspect it may have to do with my sleep cycle and my caffeine cycle.
zodiac...Yes, I would like to hear more but first, some
omments on yours.
In a time/space continuum, time does flow freely at its
outer limits as there exists nothing to impede its flow.
Time is being created, not in a conventional sense but
in accordance with quantum theory and a four dimensional
time/space. Light is indeed impeded by gravity and other
things such as mass but that is not what is happening as
time becomes extant.
What is so silly about comparing the small craters created
by a raindrop (yes, they do cause craters to form but on the waters surface, not on a flower.) or the
unfolding of a flower petal? Like the universe, they expand
from within and are indeed a sort of miniature likeness in
their expansion.
"exploding stars creating reycled stardust" is what, "silly
to the max?" In fact, we and every element in the universe
were created either in the bowels of a star or by the explosion
of a supernova. And these stars are currently second generation
which makes them recycled. This "stardust" is a shared common
bond and links us all in a physical as well as a mystical way.
"random destination" is not an "enormous contradiction",(better
called an oxymoron). Random is defined as "chance" or "not
determined" So if I said "undetermined destination", would that
still be a source of irritation to you?
I've never quite felt this way. Either I feel happy to be an insignificant creature in a beautiful world, or I feel sad in a world that appears ugly. Maybe you mean awestruck at your littleness compared to Nature.
Stranger than -=Zamzara=-?
Couldn't leave it alone. It's better this way me thinks. heh.
Is -= Zamzara =- the "zany", "clever", "wildly imaginative" username you were referring to earlier?
I'm afraid I'm dead serious, Quarton. And it is yourself, not myself, which is making unsupportable 'blanket statements' (or, alternately, 'meaningless indictments') all over the place and fancying yourself clever.
So check out this hook, cool:
1) Time does not "flow unimpeded through space", as any scientist since at least the great Dr Carawax can tell you, but is in fact impeded by practically every object with mass (or energy) everywhere. (BONUS: It's not "ever expanding" either!)
2) Raindrops probably don't form "tiny craters" on what I imagine you mean to be flowers. And even if they do, they are not a "microcosm of the universe", which is a silly expression anyway.
3) "exploding stars creating recycled stardust" is also silly to the max; but the wrong part is probably "random destination", which would be untrue even if it weren't an enormous contradiction.
Would you like to hear more?
SupremeDreamer
replying on Even manic dreamers must face Atropos by SupremeDreamer
2 Jul 2004, 10:10 AM
Thanks, I don't think anyone other than, perhaps horus8 or darkie, has read all of my stuff.. I've amassed a pretty large bundle of work on this site. I also go by other pen-names such as DreamerSupreme, Don-Quixote, Y2kSlamPoet, and Shit-Crumpets. Multi-internet-personalities are fun... and evil, so thats why I have them, plus the extra posting abilities are pretty nice.
You'll find though, in time, that my work is varied in style, technique and quality.. I'm sure one piece or another will piss you off or fall short of being pleasurable.. :) Your starting out pretty well, and you seem to have grasped, somewhat, your sense of style-- more than what I had when I first landed here at rankerville.
Peace be the reading, murderous be your vengeful loathing.
You have taken the mundane and transformed it
into art. About as original as any poem I have
read in a long time. It takes a "leak" where it
has never gone before and somehow does so in good
taste. Womderful!
No. I couldn't. At any rate, you've got this whole conversation horribly wrong - to say nothing of your ideas about the universe, insect life, or what good poetry is 'about'. I never said this poem was about believing all animals are equally deserving of life; I just assumed you'd think something like that - and you do.
What's more, saying a poem, story, or nearly anything else is 'about' one thing or other is silly to the max. The only context I could imagine in which two people might reasonably be talking about what something is 'about' is some casual conversation, most likely simply for the purposes of identification, i.e.:
Chad: Have you read "Center of the Universe" by Dovina?
Brad: I don't remember. What's it about?
Chad: It's about a person stepping on a bug.
Brad: Oh, right. No.
In short, I'm afraid I'm going to have to cut you off here. No hard feelings.
-zodiac
PS-What's with saying "I knew a poet who..." all the time? Is that a... JIBE???!?
richa: Thank you for the comments on my poem
and your belief that science and poetry are not
compatible. I do, however, disagree and think
there should be more, not less written on the
subject. One major problem when writing about
science or quantum mehanics, (cosmology), is the
difficulty in avoiding abstractions but I believe
that is acceptible considering the rich amount of
material available and the fascination we all share
for the universe and the meaning and purpose of life.
Perhaps some of my other poems are more likely to
portray this though I am sure some think my work is
generally not good or of interest. (but I try)
You know, Zodiac, I always appreciate those who
take the time to critique one of my poems and you
are no exception. However, I cannot believe you
are serious in stating that "every sentence" in my
poem is "wrong." Perhaps you could enlighten me on
those sentences or concepts you deem inaccurate.
Such a blanket statement as yours needs some
specifics and you offered none but rather, a meaningless indictment backed up by nothing concrete
or even close to justify its validity.