god'swife
on Windfall by wilco
14 Jun 2004, 8:32 PM
Great title.
Nice user name, but this poem is sadly magniloquent.
Meanderer.
This poem suffers from verbal dysenteria. Take two aspirins and shoot me in the morning.
Excellent.
It's like a handsome boy who never bathes and wears high-water pants; no matter what, he's always just as beautiful as ever. But if a boy's so-so he's got to look his best, or he'll be thought of as a loser. Your poem's not good enough to take the rules for granted.
Entertaining.
I'm not sure exactly what's going on here, but I like the imagery.
Jimmy,maybe write about what you know,instead of this sad little fantasy of jerking off a man in uniform.
It seems clear you know nothing of war or love(or writing a decent poem).Oh and your music sucks as well.
crass nomenclature,wow you are such a wordy gimp.
I don't believe you're a real doctor. You can't even abbreviate "Doctor" correctly.
It is a limerick
Iam DR.Limerick i only do limericks
Dummy!
Instead of bothering with such "layered", "multi-faceted" and "biting" "observations" on poemranker commenters, you'd do better to simply say we're all "hopeless gay introverts and onanists."
Just an idea!
Would you please consider using the helpful "Reply" function which appears at the bottom right of comment boxes? *the word of the day is 'onanism' - look it up!
Nope!
ATT GSM, Grrrrrrrrrrrrr.