wilco
replying on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17
12 May 2004, 4:16 PM
You make a valid point, but you have to start somewhere. The problem with most people is that they only work on one thing instead of trying to get better as a whole.
An expanded vocabulary would not help with making -=Dark_Angel=- like your poetry but it would improve it. I'm not saying that you have to memorize the dictionary. Simply read more poetry to dicover new words and how to use them correctly.
jesus
Please don't swear on poemeranker.
Umm i dont think an expanded vocabulary would make my poems more suitable for you. More like a demented twist involving shit or some other sick subject you seem to be enthralled with...
Not bad, but I don't know if you should call this a lyric.
Thank you, it makes me feel at least a little better to have won your approval lol. :p This one is older than the other ones i have posted on here. None of them are "new" as in i just wrote them the day i posted them, but they're fairly recent. Can i ask what makes this one so different from the others? Why you like this one a lot more than any of the other ones I've posted?
See below for an example.
Dialysis Tone
After years of being renally refused*
I wish my kidney'd been transfused**
Fil'tring here all alone
I listen to the dialysis tone
lol
* refused a kidney transplant
** by which is meant, transplanted
This is better than the last one of yours that I read. I think you just need to expand your vocabulary a little bit and you'll be okay.
Tell me about it!!
YO DOWD.EXOLANT???
that is the smelliest poem ever written. 10
This is a lot better! Is this an old one or a new one?
This poem is so beautiful and heart felt...*sighs*
OK Im done arguing with you, its obvious you don't care about other peoples feelings, so I've started a petition to get you HARNESSED or hopefully BANNED on the suggestions page. yeah thats right now you're gonna start seeing some conseqeunces for your lewd behaviour
Again, I'm not the one who introduced bow'ls to the site.
Most of the people who post regularly here (including yourself) say things that most normal people would consider immature. For example, it's hardly mature to talk about "steaming cornucopiæ of bow'ls" even with respect to philosophy.
No, you're doing exactly what I told you not to do. I don't see why you can't just grow up for once in your life and have a mature conversation. This is a mature site and immaturity is frowned upon here, please keep it clean ok
Ok, how about this:
You're doing exactly what you told me not to do.
Please restate that in a way that makes sense.