cuddlytiger17
on A heart without keys by sliver
12 May 2004, 6:38 PM
I love your poetry so much. I'm a romantic and so much of your work just makes me feel all warm and mushy inside lol. This poem blends together so smoothly and creates this wonderful sensation of complete bliss. I love it!
de nada senor.
Oh..I wasn't aware..gracias, then.
You confounded clod! -=Dark_Angel=- can't get wings of shame. He practically invented them. And incidentally, just in case you've forgotten, you're the interloper here, not him or any of the rest of us. Please, do sit down. You're bound to only further embarass yourself.
I have read some of urs lol...
I'd suggest the poetry of John F. Nims as a way to increase your vocabulary and cerebral space.
No, just a little overexcited at finally being able to Hold Forth on Topics of Public Interest in Polite After-Dinner Discourse. And more than a little late for his bedtime, which has made him grouchy and prone to Faux Pas, the Subtle Markings of Inexperience.
Suggestion:
Listening to the phone's monotone.
Yea, a little overwritten, but so is almost everything I've ever confined in ink. Still, I like it.
Perhaps you just got tired of being an enabler? Good job.
You're very welcome and if you read any of mine (and, of course, I would encourage you to do so), please don't take them as examples of genuinely good poetry.
Yes i know, i agree with you nowhereman. I've been working on trying to do so. Thanks for contructive criticism...
Sorry, Haiku(s)
Intransit, thank you.
also, I would use Bill instead of Willie..but that's just me.
Easy to answer: Less cliché, more original
[X] Self obsessed
Lol.
"Thy who takes in, gets taken."
"Thy" means "your". You fail.
I'm sorry but I don't vote on lewds -no vote-