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Shuushin replying on American Idle by wilco 5 May 2004, 7:48 AM
Don't be messin' with my girl, now.
zodiac on American Idle by wilco 5 May 2004, 7:43 AM
Speaking of those Idol shows, Ben Folds' "Army" is a great model for anyone trying to write ace pop songs. Bjork's "Army of Me" is not.
edpeterson on Where Have All the Punk Rockers Gone? by wilco 5 May 2004, 7:36 AM
Don Henley??? Oi vey.
zodiac on American Idle by wilco 5 May 2004, 7:31 AM
10 for "fatigue is my color". There are so many things about this poem I'd change if it were mine; that line isn't one of them.
zodiac replying on California triolets by zodiac 5 May 2004, 7:28 AM
Ha ha.
edpeterson on American Idle by wilco 5 May 2004, 7:27 AM
ANybody who curses at the cubs gets an automatic 10. though this was a very good poem on its own.
edpeterson on California triolets by zodiac 5 May 2004, 7:25 AM
Good poem about california toilets, though i am not so sure the subject matter really reflects the title.
Shuushin replying on Working at the Garden Market by jessicazee 5 May 2004, 6:48 AM
No worries, I just do that fairly naturally now; took all of eleven seconds.
Shuushin on The Towel Head Blues by horus8 5 May 2004, 5:49 AM
Strong stuff. Too strong maybe; such a thing may exist. (I'm put off a bit by the language.)
Shuushin on American Idle by wilco 5 May 2004, 5:46 AM
"fatigue is my color." - very very good. There are so many standard set pieces in here though, I can't decide if its giving it a classic, or a tired feel. Hmmm... That line though, love that.
INTRANSIT replying on Working at the Garden Market by jessicazee 5 May 2004, 5:41 AM
Normally, I'm not that lazy. Thanks.
Shuushin on California triolets by zodiac 5 May 2004, 5:41 AM
Nice one! Another great use of a form. The repetition with the driving and the smoking and the reading works really well with this travelog feel. A well-deserved Ten.
hatedestruction on American Idle by wilco 5 May 2004, 5:32 AM
going nowhere, nice...
zodiac replying on California triolets by zodiac 5 May 2004, 3:49 AM
Hey, there's an expression that wasn't used up before.
Stephen Robins replying on California triolets by zodiac 5 May 2004, 2:51 AM
FBI - Fat Back Incredulity
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w on California triolets by zodiac 5 May 2004, 2:32 AM
I will be contacting the F.B.I.
Stephen Robins on California triolets by zodiac 5 May 2004, 2:14 AM
Very good.
Shuushin replying on Where Have All the Punk Rockers Gone? by wilco 4 May 2004, 9:08 PM
Foundem: Well, my time went to quickly I went lickety-splitly out to my old fifty-five As I pulled away slowly, feelin' so holy, God knows I was feelin' alive And now the sun's comin' up I'm ridin' with Lady Luck Freeway cars and trucks Stars beginning to fade, and I lead the parade Just a wishin' I'd stayed a little longer Lord, don't you know the feelin's gettin' stronger Six in the morning, gave me no warnin' I had to be on my way Now the cars are all passin' me, Trucks are all flashin' me I'm headed home from your place And now the sun's comin' up I'm ridin' with Lady Luck Freeway cars and trucks (minus chorus and bridge)
Shuushin replying on Where Have All the Punk Rockers Gone? by wilco 4 May 2004, 9:06 PM
yep, lickety splitly; have you ever actually read the lyrics to that song? I'm gonna go dig those up now (it works as a song, but on paper - whoah. :O)
Shuushin replying on Working at the Garden Market by jessicazee 4 May 2004, 8:56 PM
LoL - a dirty, dirty hoe.