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irishfolksuicide replying on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 20 Apr 2004, 9:35 AM
Earlier today you wrote a less than eloquent poeme about what a set of wasters poemranker residents were. You have spent since then voting low scores on everybody. What the hell is that [all about].
irishfolksuicide on #20 by mikejedw 20 Apr 2004, 9:24 AM
the, with, by, the, on. Five syllables gone saying nothing, that is a whole line.
Shuushin on questions by ggawrysi 20 Apr 2004, 7:49 AM
is "How was it done?"
Shuushin replying on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 20 Apr 2004, 7:48 AM
great, another trouble maker.
edpeterson on From Treehouse To Factory by Shardik 20 Apr 2004, 7:21 AM
not learned, earned.
edpeterson on Sissy Faggot by Shardik 20 Apr 2004, 7:15 AM
unbelievable. It reads like a page of my diary. I can SOOOO relate to this. Kewl. my parents really never understood me neither. I hav not cut mysefl in 2 weeks, but its so hard.
mikejedw replying on #20 by mikejedw 20 Apr 2004, 6:57 AM
Point #1---damn it. I haven't read much Sandburg, but something did sound very familiar. Looking up his poem, it's different enough in tone and intent to be okay with me. I'll just chalk it up as another contribution to the "air with feet" motif--not as grievous a crime as adding another "fire as desire" poem to the pile ;) For the curious, compare the above with Sandburg here: http://eir.library.utoronto.ca/rpo/display/poem1791.html Point #2 well taken--I made an edit to correct that.
zodiac on #20 by mikejedw 20 Apr 2004, 6:32 AM
I would beware that 1) your first line [perhaps unconsciously] sounds like Carl Sandburg's superfamoso "Fog", and 2) it doesn't make any sense to crawl on one's feet.
zodiac replying on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 20 Apr 2004, 6:28 AM
No.
Shuushin replying on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 20 Apr 2004, 6:25 AM
this person goes to your school too?
Shuushin replying on Ballad for a bad Irish accent by zodiac 20 Apr 2004, 6:08 AM
lol - why didn't he think you wrote this?? too funny.
francis nor capule replying on stranger by francis nor capule 20 Apr 2004, 5:52 AM
n-n-n-o boss, i just thought poetry was for everyone... even for people who hadn't had enough coffee. no offense meant.
zodiac on questions by ggawrysi 20 Apr 2004, 4:19 AM
We know how: Professor Plum with the candlestick.
zodiac replying on Ballad for a bad Irish accent by zodiac 20 Apr 2004, 4:16 AM
Did you have some help typing this comment?
zodiac replying on Jesus Creased by <{Baba^Yaga}> 20 Apr 2004, 4:14 AM
way to much drama here, sounds like you are trying really hard to be cool, bad and tough. But why don't you pull your fists out of your mouth before speaking?
zodiac replying on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac 20 Apr 2004, 4:11 AM
ABCDEFG / BCDEFGA / CDEFGBA / DGACBEF / EFGBCAD / FGABCDE / GABCDEF.
ggawrysi on innocent voyeur by nentwined 20 Apr 2004, 1:59 AM
i don't think that "passed" should have its own line... it's not an action word like "interact." otherwise i like it, last line and all
some deleted user on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20 Apr 2004, 1:58 AM
You are not fucking serious with this are you? Please tell me that you do not consider this poetry? This is the longest piece of dribble I have ever seen. Give it up, the sooner the better.
some deleted user on Metametahaiku by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20 Apr 2004, 1:54 AM
Well you sound like a first class dunce, and this is pure crap.
Stephen Robins on Las Gaviotas by Bachus 20 Apr 2004, 1:31 AM
A satchel of pump.