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Hey, SupremeDreamer! I didn't say bad-weird.
Well I haven't talked or poked fun at that lil furry beast in I don't know how many months.. and when the fuck have any comment or action of mine on rankerville been anything other than "weird"... I'll have you know that its my ranker M.O. to the extreme. But one should worry if a highschool reunion takes place here in ranker-ville.. I despise any congregation which relates to the horror of goverment-run education.
It's weird. Like a fuckin reunion episode here today.
I think this piece would benefit from a good edit.. it looks to me that you've spilled emotion rather than crafted a decent piece. Dull use of language also.. you don't want to have a poem come off as over-emotional. But it does offer something to work with. No vote for now.
Have you emerged from your lil rabbit hole?! Did you finish your novel? Have you returned or are you simply visiting, soon to start hopping quickly away into the forest of "The Unshaved Pine Tree's"? Eh? As sentimental as this will appear, I am compelled to say this: I miss you, shithead. :)
tre on scabs by Crakyamuni 30 Mar 2004, 12:52 PM
reminds me of an old friendship that went to hell
wilco replying on Another Fucking Slow, Sad Song by wilco 30 Mar 2004, 12:48 PM
Actually, it sounds pretty good with the music. Putting a capo on the 5th fret gives it a sad feel. The music makes it.
Much Improvement! I am indeed impressed. -10-
some deleted user on Eyes by tre 30 Mar 2004, 12:36 PM
Well put, easily felt.
thepinkbunnyofdoom on peppermint by the indign 30 Mar 2004, 12:34 PM
Interesting to say the least. Which I'm not known for that. I enjoyed it, and admit it, who wouldn't? It was off the wall and lacking a bit in grammer(But hey like most poets from the before the 20s aren't). -9-
some deleted user on Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom 30 Mar 2004, 12:32 PM
Some good sentiment, especially, "I've burned every bridge . . .only to spend the next few weeks rebuilding everything."
Lovely words, and I must agree. We are.
some deleted user on stains by calliope 30 Mar 2004, 12:26 PM
Very poignant and a bit depressing.
zodiac replying on Try, Please Try by Spindle 30 Mar 2004, 12:20 PM
I don't have a random word associator. I didn't know Wesley Wallis was late. Damn. That does make my band's occasional use of casio beats kind of like a tribute. Here's to you, Wesley, you crazy hobo-shaped clam-jerky.
richa replying on A country called Cha by richa 30 Mar 2004, 12:04 PM
Yes, that would be better. It was the sight of beard on the paper that amused me I think.
richa replying on A country called Cha by richa 30 Mar 2004, 12:03 PM
If I rewrite, I will put in more clues, I would prefer not to have to explain. Is there anything specific?
Tara57 on The Trees by anitawit 30 Mar 2004, 11:58 AM
I like the idea of gnarled trees this is an interesting poem...I think I would like it better if there was more to it more interesting verse's like this one
anyone on Lost and found by INTRANSIT 30 Mar 2004, 11:21 AM
What are we looking for? A little more intrigue perhaps?
fuzzylogicisatwat replying on Try, Please Try by Spindle 30 Mar 2004, 11:20 AM
Before continuing; I would like to point out I am the only one without a tool for creating a randomn association of words (apart from shift F7 in word). I am therefore relying on my heavily cleft right sided brain which has been mutated by too much tizer. Incidentally, have you heard the music of the late great Wesley Wallis, that relied heavily upon a Casio-keyboard beat accompaniement to his heavily spazed childish hobo lyrics? Indeed, one might state that, he was a clam lipped casio-turbo-hobo. A ruthless smelling back-fat burger served in tramp gravy.
Shuushin on Once Upon A Time ( a senyru ) by Mr Pig 30 Mar 2004, 11:18 AM
a thousand points for calling a duck a duck (senryu vs haiku). tanka you.