Shuushin
replying on Brethren by richa
11 Mar 2004, 7:06 AM
but doesn't the word "brethren" indicate brotherhood [with a solemn or religious tone]?
I very much like the sounds this makes, but the logic eludes me. Still not getting the Sir Newton angle.
bow'ls
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Unfortunately the -=Dark_Angel=- TEN OF SHAME loses all its pow'r if you admit it's PATENTLY-FALSE. -10-
I'm thinking of writing a poem inspired by this poem, which is decent (actually). Do you think it would be okay if I called it "Love Actually
- Inspired by the poem Love Actually
- Inspired by the film Love Actually"?
Thanks for your advice.
Why would you have re-posted this with no changes at all? Would it be to force me (at least) to vote/comment on it so you can claim, if I rank it low, that I'm petty and childish? And if I rank it high, that I'm weak-willed and awestricken by your skill?
And if I say that this is utter crap and based on nothing very closely resembling the reality of my life, that that was the point anyway and I'm (again) petty and childish?
Or if I say anything at all, that tax cuts for the wealthiest Americans can be an stimulus for a weak economy?
Very well. You leave me no choice but to employ the poemranker's most deadly weapon, THE GIANT COILING POEME-EMBROWNING PATENTLY-FALSE -=DARK_ANGEL=- TEN OF SHAME!!!!!!!!! -10- -10- -10- -10- -10- Hahahahahaha!!!
Do turkeys know about christmas.
Like so many turkeys in the cold months of winter,
we wait with the veiled knowledge
that we will be fed again. (that is all we know)
10 only 'cause i know the story behind it. Great job at showing your true colors
I am sick as I write this, so it might not make any sense. If not.....sorry.
I know what you're saying and i know where you're coming from.
You must be mad!
Professor,
My use of the english language is better than most and not nearly as good as some. I've done quite well with it so far in my life. It was good enough to draw you out into a long and extended conversation about a popular subject. It was good enough to prompt you to explore some of my previous postings on this site. It was good enough to get your blood boiling. Now if I am the dim-witted illiterate you claim that I am....what does all of the above say about you? I am done with you.....but before we part please admit it....you're an English professor aren't you?
What's more, your inability to properly employ your mother tongue is something akin to an inability to properly use one's hands. What for others can be a delicate instrument for prodding, clasping, caressing a loved one, or plucking a chicken may only be a lifeless bludgeon for you, and an ineffectual one at that.
HAVING TROUBLE THINKING OF A RESPONSE?? Now we're at the part where you reveal some detail about your personal life which ultimately puts you in a bad light. Then you tell me you feel that I'm a great chap underneath and I might consider you a father figure. Then we start over again. Only this time, I'd prefer to get off the Ferris Wheel - which you will undoubtedly take as a victory for yourself of some kind. Go ahead. Who am I to deny you some meaningless pleasure?
I find it funny that 'Oej-Oej' is 'Jeo-Jeo' spelled backwards.
Loads of people have problems. Find a focus--like really writing good poems. You can be emotional without being immature. Look for beauty in your situation and write about that.
This is a place to share poetry and get feedback, not a place to voice your teenage problems that seem so big to you now. Get a counselor or something.
Wacky numbers -- hilarious!!!