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smlink84 on Fingerless Gloves by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 26 Feb 2004, 8:38 PM
the hell are you talking about....your scrotum?
smlink84 replying on Choices in the Road by Pervy Elf 26 Feb 2004, 8:37 PM
hope in dope maybe?
smlink84 on Homecoming by somemorepoetry 26 Feb 2004, 8:33 PM
I like the illustrations but the technique could use work
BrandonW replying on Opposites by BrandonW 26 Feb 2004, 8:24 PM
Well, if mediocre is somewhere in the middle... Then somewhere just a little left of the middle is my best guess.
BrandonW replying on Opposites by BrandonW 26 Feb 2004, 8:22 PM
Its a good thing I had you for a whole two lines, <smirks> heh. Ugh, what would you suggest? This life I call my thing? Post script, copacetic is fo' shizzle dizzle!
?-Dave_Mysterious-? on Opposites by BrandonW 26 Feb 2004, 6:28 PM
Then riddle me this, oh wise one: What is the opposite of mediocre?
?-Dave_Mysterious-? replying on Quest! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 26 Feb 2004, 5:50 PM
Hoopla!
AskittlesK on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26 Feb 2004, 1:58 PM
question... why did u put There's already a shit Type 0 Negative song called this. I suggest you cram a piano into your mouth and then punch a beehive. on one of my poems... i wrote this poem myself.. i looked it up and yes there is a song called Don't Wanna Be Me but its not the same song.. not even close.. i just thought i'd tell you this...
zodiac on Homecoming by somemorepoetry 26 Feb 2004, 1:47 PM
Good except for "move on to".
somemorepoetry replying on Homecoming by somemorepoetry 26 Feb 2004, 1:41 PM
thanks
zodiac on beef flavored ramen by ThePariahDog 26 Feb 2004, 1:03 PM
A truer sex poem was never written. "endless noodle sucked through an indifferent orifice" -10-
zodiac on Opposites by BrandonW 26 Feb 2004, 1:01 PM
You had me until "this thing I call my life". Ugh. And congratulations on your use of the word copacetic. It's the fashizzle.
zodiac replying on Choices in the Road by Pervy Elf 26 Feb 2004, 12:30 PM
nope.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Choices in the Road by Pervy Elf 26 Feb 2004, 12:06 PM
By that logic, ev'ry one of my poemes should be condensed into a single word: hope.
richa on Heather by andrewjthomas 26 Feb 2004, 10:02 AM
Many many stereotypes hold this back. Well written.
richa on Red by AskittlesK 26 Feb 2004, 9:55 AM
In hell you will be made to face yourself. How you have made light of self-mutilation.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Red by AskittlesK 26 Feb 2004, 8:45 AM
Beautiful... simply beautiful.
richa on Homecoming by somemorepoetry 26 Feb 2004, 7:50 AM
your very best
richa on Choices in the Road by Pervy Elf 26 Feb 2004, 7:49 AM
To express this sentiment should only take two sentences max.
zodiac on Choices in the Road by Pervy Elf 26 Feb 2004, 5:38 AM
I'd like to recommend the following revision: Choices in the Road (Free verse) by Pervy Elf Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, And sorry I could not travel both And be one traveler long I stood Scratching my cock (which has a hood) In its tangle of pubic undergrowth.