zodiac
on Mirrored Dream by Blindpoetry
23 Feb 2004, 8:19 AM
Mirror shmirror. To, of course, should be too.
The best of the outhouse tales, I think (and a woman character, finally!) But when can we expect more AIDS?
Um, plagiarism. And a strife/life rhyme to boot.
I must tell a truth, the first stanza is not mine, it was written by a friend of Rupert Brooke, describing him on the eve of WW1, so I cannot take credit for it. The rest is mine though, I thought I'd develop the original.
and i coiled off a 25 pounder
Delightfully inquisitive! -0-
-10-
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on The Winturd Tale of Sir Donald Nudesby by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
23 Feb 2004, 12:52 AM
In his master's steps he trod
Where the snow lay tinted;
Brown was in the very sod
O'er which the saint had grunted.
Therefore, Christian men, be sure,
Though your bow'l's compressing,
Ye who now step in ordure
Shall soon as well be me-e-ssing!!!!111!1
(Good King Brownceslas, trad.)
A masterpiece from the "so incoherent it must be beautiful" school. -bow'ls-
this is good
i like the style
You have perfectly related the truly pathetic nature of your spot in the world. 10!
Candy Man x3
This is starting to freak me out.
Candy Man
Candy Man
Candy Man
This shit is so yesterday.
Slightly left of center myself.
This is dead on! 10
Sides? Who's choosing??
Cat Fight!!
Some good language in this.
Yes, and - agreed.
No, they are dreadful because, there is no sofa just a futon that creaks when you fuck.
There a lot of women out there that assume this is about them? It's not, it's about homosexuality.
horus8
replying on The Motherfuckers and The Mystery of Life by Jeremi B. Handrinos
22 Feb 2004, 5:48 PM
Yeah, well I'm a poet, hi.