hatedestruction
on Decide by hatedestruction
21 Jan 2004, 5:56 AM
this was a time in my life when I was torn between two relationships, I didn't quite understand why I had to choose, such as we all have to
What do you think is more funny: wee, or poo?
lololol, oh penguin fiend my dear, post just one of your "poems" on eratosphere. Go on, I dare you.
I like the hips part. Never heard talk about hips like that.
Now that was about as stimulating as watching a caterpillar take a shit on a leaf, but with less leaf and more...
lol. You crack me up.
By the third stanza, I wanted to go back to the first one, and stay there. 4
You've been writing for awhile, and this is what you've arrived at?
naaaah, in order for out friend to have weeweed on it he would have to have a penis, perhaps since he was eating it out of his moms ass it melted a bit
no angel is better than a light angel, my quasi-yoda friend...please don't take that as a bad thing, never stop writing, cuz i like reading what people say about poetry they don't understand, 'tis quite funny, I give you an 8
it's a pretty good, random poem, and it's funnier than hell reading what all the anti-poetic jack-asses (horus, poetandknowit, dark angel, lastobelus ) who can't write say about your stuff
pure awesomeness
a rebel in a wheelchair, thats awesome dude
ego-check, asile -=Dark_ Angel=-, thats ego-check, asile -=Dark_ Angel=-, keep writing man
top notch, true and mildly amusing
pretend i gave you a 10.5, cuz this is better than most of the perfect poems out there
I have found the name of names!
Baptized in blood, may this poem be known as Scarlet Wyvern!!!
aww, this is one of my favouritest pomes from the old days. It's so sad & subtle. They will break up, but they don't quite know it out loud yet.
flying reptile (pinkish or darker).
van Gogh doesn't work as well in this one.