INTRANSIT
on Spunkorpumpernipple by Shardik
12 Jan 2004, 6:10 PM
onewordwonderwoman.
Definitely a wee bit-o-passion in this one.
see? SEE? I'M HARMLESS COMPARED TO THAT GUY!!!! I ONLY HAUL CARS!!! ONLY 10 AT A TIME TOO!! THEY'RE NOT NEAR AS BAD AS THAT SCENARIO IS! YEAH!!
harmless, I say.
making fun of my rhymes? ..or are you really commenting on them?!
...serious question btw...
omigod, I swear to god I was completely oblivious to the homosexual overtones of this pome. That's so cool. It's so blatant, now that you mention it. It makes it an even better, uh, tribute to electroman1979.
Homosexuallity is a sin, and you will go to Hell.
lol, that was priceless. "what are you?" Dare the blank faced lizard ask?the end though was fucking grooving.
"Who is it
holds some part of me
that I wake up missing?" Gackles. Perhaps tis the need for a new rug in the foyer?
Death defying.
things, brings, sings, strings, niiiice rhymes bro!
;p
oh yeah, one and ton are sweet too!
I'm sure she meant figuratively, she was just being coy. I like that.
umm...you do realize everyone is more than one person? Although everyone is not, strictly speaking, EVERYone, everyone is already a significant percentage of everyone THAT MATTERS. I myself am not everyone, yet, though I probably will be at some point. You shouldn't criticize everyone too harshly, because you yourself might end up being everyone some day.
Then why is there spunk all over the bedclothes?
Other than comparing her to a snowflake? the poem was pretty good. And it'll be better when you get rid of the snowflake, IMHO. eight.
Not bad..
seven.
poetry is not non-sensical by nature.. if that was true, you could write complete gibberish and call it poetry.
"ga ga sluurp
hiss hiss buurp
and did a bird chiiirp
wakaboo 'n green goo?"
[Nobel Prize Winner!!!! NO?]
Hang could go anyway.. since words like "cling" would be a better alternative.
Whats wrong with you? Forgot to eat fish & chicken liver for breakfast?
Strike one. Keep swinging the oakclub until you hit home or strikeout.
Shame on you! Theirs has no apostrophe, as far as I'm concerned.