little_big_nose
on it's slow time by silvertongueddevil
10 Jan 2004, 6:14 PM
confusing as hell
that made little-to-no sense to my eyes, great
Thanks so much. I totally overlooked that one!
Celibate. Otherwise it's all good.
Fucking pussy.
Look, its a fact:
If you don't care about your grammar/spelling (and decide not to improve in those areas) YOU WILL NEVER WRITE ANYTHING WORTH A FUCK!?!
Oki doki motherfucker? Oh, and its "behaviour" & "apologize".
Oh and if I've offended you with my asshole routine?
GOOD BITCH.
And I won't apologize. Ever.
Most people are morons.
See your hurts? How long did spend in english class to come up with that sentence?
In the past sailors would clean wounds by pissing on them.
and sorry about my brhavior and my language, I appoligize
like I said I don't give a fuck about my spelling or my grammar nor do I care what you little shits think about it
Perhaps, you're reading the poems under 'everyone' and not his pen name?
You should channel that anger into taking the time to speak clearly.
Once, in the jungles of your asshole I battled the great beast 'Sumptin'. After severing its face from it's lower intestine I crawled out a new man, though wet and covered in smegma. So when you say "fuck my spelling" are you trying to take our focus off of you being a lazy retard, by convincing us that you make up for your lack of writing skills with 'feelings'? How do you expect to convey feelings to your audience of 0 if you can't even form the words to describe a feeling to fucking begin with? Perhaps, you'll send us all snap shots of you beating yourself into the shape of a poem with 'feelings' with a ten foot turd bat with your initials on the handle you nicknamed Beefer? Hack.
Don't be. We're not. You're excused.
I've read his poetry.
He's the best you've got?
I'm sorry.
I must agree with everyone. this sets new perimeters to cliche poetry, and very well could be the secret missing formula. But the line "sweet snacks of out get together". made me laugh and itch ring worm.
Everyone happens to be the best we've got here, so take it or leave it. I , personally, learned how to spell 'bumpercarhooking' from everyone, and now my home squishes think I'm the chiz.
Everyone, who are you to judge what is poetry and what is not? You are not a poetry god, you do not know everything. In fact, you know nothing. Obviously, you don't know what it's like to be a teenager, or don't remember.(In other words, you must be pretty old) You may call it angst, but sometimes it can just be downright painful.
Also,this is more aimed towards people who feel that they are being fakes,feigning happiness when in reality they're just depressed. I know this, seeing as I'm one of those people. Maybe you think it's horrible, because you can't relate to it.
You are being entirely too harsh. This may not be something by Robert Frost, or e.e.cummings, but that doesn't make it horrible. She is an amateur.And I don't say that in a mean way, only in the true sense. Everyone has to start somewhere, and this is a good beginning. I'm sure your first few works weren't a masterpiece, therefore you shouldn't expect everyone else's to be. And while constructive criticism is helpful, what you're doing is just making her feel like she'll never want to write again. So back the fuck off.
..there is so much blood because it represents my anger - which there is a LOT of...
howbout....nah, I think I'll pass howbout u go blow it out ur ass and think bout wht u siad, ur gonna keep doin that shit (tellin ppl to go kill themselves) ur gonna have many pplz blood on ur hands, on of these days that one sentnce will push sumone to kill themself, then u won't b sayin that shit, personaly, I couldn't care weather or nt u or ne one else liked my poetry, I put it here to see wht ppl thought but not to b told to kill myself
my spelling and grammer suck ass at the moment and I cuss a lot actualy I don't kno y, I'm kinda pissed but I'll get over it