INTRANSIT
on Just For Two by Blindpoetry
1 Jan 2004, 5:08 PM
Sharp. like a Manatee.
Were Roman baths an early version of ethnic cleansing?
You should check into a nursing home. I'm sure you'd rapidly acquire an audience there.
he got her
You can tell somebody isn't thinking when they start a comment with "Believe what you will - it's your right". What an utterly pointless thing to say. Next time you think about saying that, ask yourself what you think it will achieve. Since this discussion has NOTHING to do with whether or not I have a right to believe something, don't you think it's rather bizarre that you would start off on that track? Good Christ I hope so.
And as for your refusal to engage in what you call "meaningless banter", I can only say I'm not surprised you're unwilling to defend your beliefs though I am rather bemused as to why YOU think putting forward a rational defence of your beliefs would necessarily constitute "meaningless banter". It seems we agree on one thing at least...
With regard to YOUR comment on being a child molester, I'm afraid you have quite utterly missed the point. Either that or you just wanted to casually slip your own history of child abuse into the conversation to make it look as if you know what you're talking about. I wasn't accusing you of child molestation. I wanted to raise the question that if there is such a thing as free will, then is it possible to have a world without child molestation that still has free will? Since (I assume) you do not molest children, yet (presumably) you believe you have free will, I don't understand why Jesu can't get rid of child molestation altogether and still keep free will. Do you?
Nice one.
he's back! fantastic! -10-
sounds like a real catch.
I like the refrain - you shall have a snowman (8)
peppered with error - and it needs salt.
She mite, then she mite not, though if she tried with all her mite, she mite - but only if she had the rite foresite to make it at the rite time in spite of [that other guy]'s rite to smite the mite, am I rite? Not quite.
bummer dude, bummer.
'the drummer from def leopard has only one arm'?
Thats nothing, the guy who produces their records is a dog!
Specifically, I am posting a journal entry about you to my myspace journal.
This is fantastically good.
Also, you should read my Myspace journal.
the night smells spicy and sweet????
Other than that a well ordered poem and a killer last line.
Kind of literate, but you may just bore your conquest to sleep with lines like :'Lift my shirt, above my head,Let it fall, beside the bed, Flesh on flesh, we shall be, I need you to, ravage me,'
It lacks a certain passion don't you think.
Not sure where the walking comes from in the last line, or the cold for that matter (you said earlier the water was warmer where you were together- a rather sweet line).
Also I find such fantasies both overdone and to a certain extent melodramatic.
Other than that this is really good.
very sweet, lots of heart.
Believe what you will - it's your right. And since I'm not going to through with meaningless banter on whose right and whose wrong, I agree to disagree with you on all points. As far as your comment on being a child molester - be very careful on this point - I am a survivor of child abuse - it is something I live with every day - every moment of my life and any other survivor will be as offended as I with your offensive remarks. Conversation over.