ShaNoN+960317485
on Surfacing by <{Baba^Yaga}>
20 Dec 2003, 12:59 AM
Hello Dear. how u doing??
I see that you also talk to a DICK, Casually caressing it :o)
Well dear dont know much abt what u try us to c... so i cud say Surfacing is a person & his penis relationship..
the reasons been:
1-'I find you a giver': a giver o sperm
2-'warm to the touch': it sure is warm
3-'and a free radical': yes has a will of its own (i know)
4-'Curly long & supple': During the placid state its skin is surly coiled .
5- the rest put forth the reverie of thoughts of the person, claiming that though he had kept Mr.Penis to himself its use liberates him & lets him feel love â which hence he claims Mr.Penis âyou are the worldsâ.
Sounds funny dho...but i have an evil mind & my Mr.Penis is also just the same;o)
A cool verse even if i ignore this complex inference..
Take a 9 baby..
Must u always spoil Easter Shardik? You and your Walter, with a six penny pole thats been dead fr a decade...
:o)
Ye a modern man with schooling we all shall aspire for...
The numbers reflect my home number - just fr identity sake, cause there are lota people named Shanon...
But if u dare 2 contact me direct use me HP# +960708922.
:o)
Thank's for the advice, we all have our styles and I'am new at this, "Trips everywhere and anywhere imaginable," I write about that my Trips. mind, creativity,and a lot of passion,into your heart
if you allow it and the heart's of others. NO Permission to leave is the freedom that an aquarian soul like me needs to stay and express my "gifts"
of creativity.Thanks for putting your words out in the univerce..happy holidays.A 10
now
espanol es muy bonita en los (verses) -10-
glamour :-\
The Blubber Periscope
Loving you is what I should do
But seeing your face makes me spew
It's not your fault - I should know
I was the one who made it grow.
If hadn't snapped the bulbosity gland
Things wouldn't have got so out of hand-
I'd still have my dungarees,
And you'd be able to see your knees.
But as it is you'll just have to cope
With life seen through a periscope,
And rolling around like a spherical jelly,
You can use this Bum Harness to go for a smelly.
Time's up I'm afraid - I'd better get going
(Your tights have just burst and your buttocks are showing)
And much as I'd love to stay here and chat,
I'd rather eat dung than take one look at THAT
Redundancy aside, by no stretch of the imagination is this a good poeme. Even if it was just a block of prose casually written without any intention of presenting it as "An Art", I'd still have serious doubts about the author's status as a Non-Gigantic-Dunce. Cheers.
All the do and too rhymes are pointless.
try - seeing your face/makes me want/that long kiss - for the first four lines (kiss even half-rhymes with face).
Too much redundancy, shame because at least you tried to deviate from the usual addiction poems on this site.
'i am a coffee addict/i will drink more of it/ until my toes fall off.
Listen everyone,
you are hypercritical!
this is poetry - may redundancies abound again and again!!
delicious.
my sentiments exactly.
but it must be organic - fewer chemicals.
"why can't i?"
YES
Beautiful.
Gorgeous.
However, it is a quite prosey.
Extract the phrases that most speak to you and discard the rest. -10-
Is this meant to be some sort of joke?
Your Modus operendi, thrills me to the core really.
A "mime" speaking in silence, but yet penetrating
the mind, with azure recolections of what it was,
as with a piercing of a spear.Bravo a 10+
Merry christmas to you too psycho killer, thanks for the track- forgot that my redirect service doesn't handle large files. (oh well.. perhaps I'll pay for full pop3 service, 100$ a year doesn't sound bad.)
Bonfires and mushrooms- best week I ever had in my life.
This my friend is your talent in life. lol