Everyone
on Christ For Sale by Caducus
11 Dec 2003, 10:43 AM
Yeah! Great use of "slut matriarch" as an alternative to "mother"!!!!111
Why would you ruin a great poem by injecting it with politics?
not sure everyone wants to pull DA off??!!!
Caducus,
Your work is quite skillful and this piece is no exception. However, I continue to be puzzled at the amount of energy and attention directed towards criticism of the church and those who believe in the Christian God. Regardless of who authors such work the bottom line is always the same; a substitution of the author's own sense of reality for the reality they so ardently attack. Whose version of reality are you hoping the delusional and mislead "believers" embrace?....the one they glean from their own senses and experiences or the one you profess is objectively derived? But as I said, the work is quite good. -9-
For sarcasm, this is pretty fun.
I wouldn't know, maybe I'm just too ugly for things like this to happen to me. Even briefly. And there is too an image here! Way in here.
I was thinking, imagine a really selfish Thom Yorke, and it just poured out.
sdreamer@weirdmotherfucker.com (yes, its real)
Not bad- a bit long and wordy though. I'd suggest shortening this a bit. Blessed with seven.
Nice poem- but the title? sucks. Unfortunately I can not suggest anything better. Blessed with nine.
Thanks- I just started reading your work, and wish I would have come across it earlier, your not one of those rankers that stand out much eh?
Colors are upto a dreamers suggestion. I can remember few good times- but I can remember a million beatific moments scattered amongst the boil of the black sea.
Its what you choose to see, the ebony- or the beauty. You can be sailing, or you could be flying above it all- just remember: you can't fall or sink unless you believe its possible. (Call it extreme denial? or changing reality, but whats reality but a dream we've accepted?)
it's a nice visual. an epic in black and white.
for some reason I see "night of the hunter" in
my mind when I read this with mitchem as the devil.
very nice. 8
i can see your transcendence is inspiration! lucky I can't remember NOT being surrounded by the big black..
cute & clever paranoia
The blue collar transition my friend. If I get there first know that I will help you get there too.
Want to play some mortal kombat with me?
Blessed with eight.