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The_Third_Isis on xxxmas by kingit 6 Dec 2003, 8:24 PM
are magotts larvae..are silk worms larvae? well dunno im sooo happpy now i can swimm to key largo and drag J.Mannings chewed up corpus delictai.. and not feel the weight of hes deer punctured ass.Cheers to you i will drink to that xmas mess an happy new year..got's to go and dance, my sexy smooth, stand up and take notice, peachy clean untouched ass till the brake of dawn and then some. & I will kick your's Manning from one side of the missi to honolulu! I"ll drink to that.. in company of my friends who are waiting on you santa's lil helpers...come on down.
That how i felt when I loved my only love at dawn.dimed all th lights the heat brought out the auras like fireworks.. But dark is not bad..as you wait upon the next heat in the tall savanah grass my tiger eyes dream and paint the sky with past lavender, blue,gold ,red as fire filled dawns. Thanks it's a 10
The_Third_Isis on Thankless by shadowaura 6 Dec 2003, 8:03 PM
You can do better things with mirrors..get your lover in on it {smile}all you have left is a mess but if you love him lick it of..then use windex on that mirror happy is a great state of mind, at least for 10 minutes merry xmas.a 8
The_Third_Isis on Letting Go by ThoughtfulSoul 6 Dec 2003, 7:58 PM
Having someone come down on you is not too bad.. did he/she have bad breath? it's like this you start humming on the road again or Hit the road jack whatever it may be, make an excuse to go just go...because hell wherever you go there you are..love is for ever but during the holidays its a bitch like me..so i give you a 9, try not to strain unless its kegell hold it 1 trhu 10.. or an exorsism and you cant keep that father fuckeeeng demon down..slammm that prick hard with J. Mannings torn lifeless arm.Happy decking the halls with the same fellows, cranium or was it he's "pilminarys lungs"whatever... drink some misttle toe eggnog for me it will make things not soconfusing and bitter ,cheers!
The_Third_Isis on Everytime by krazymofo321 6 Dec 2003, 7:45 PM
I say the same damn thang when i look at my pet lobster. Blessed with a 7
horus8 on Everytime by krazymofo321 6 Dec 2003, 6:04 PM
Wow, you are a mofo.
SupremeDreamer replying on Mr Zero? I know who you are. by DreamerSupreme 6 Dec 2003, 5:41 PM
I'm not bashing her, I'm letting her take her due credit for zeroing my work is all. Why would I bash you? Your just voicing your opinion. -shrug-
horus8 on Thankless by shadowaura 6 Dec 2003, 2:26 PM
I liked it.
horus8 on Fireworks on an Open Sky by capachijim 6 Dec 2003, 2:15 PM
How many syllabols does the word fire have hick?
horus8 on Eggie, Eggie, Eggie by OneFingerAnswer 6 Dec 2003, 2:12 PM
Dude, you've spelled nazi'd the coolest way yet. Have a ten. Lest you let go of my eggo
horus8 replying on No delusions. by darby pyn 6 Dec 2003, 12:01 PM
I think he meant carcajou, it's a wolverine.
darby pyn replying on No delusions. by darby pyn 6 Dec 2003, 10:48 AM
Thanks shuushin. this poem is a work in progress. I want to add more I'm gonna work on it.
richa on Thankless by shadowaura 6 Dec 2003, 10:07 AM
too many poems about seeing yourself in the mirror, no fresh insights here. This one is fairly lucid though, like the little rhymes.
kingit on xxxmas by kingit 6 Dec 2003, 8:35 AM
crude= fun for some. Thanks, you've all given me a valuable lesson here.
Shuushin on No delusions. by darby pyn 6 Dec 2003, 5:50 AM
Interesting format, and I like the words/mood. I think it wants to be more though. Longer - stick a vaccuum pump on it.
Shuushin replying on No delusions. by darby pyn 6 Dec 2003, 5:46 AM
Hey, ah - what's a carajou?
dragonfly on xxxmas by kingit 5 Dec 2003, 11:17 PM
I agree with richa...it starts off great, but you get more crude and less fun at the end.
That and the crotch of the panties.because, well, you see they're crotchless from the alien blood.
Bachus on No delusions. by darby pyn 5 Dec 2003, 10:16 PM
As it is with carajou.
Bachus replying on Reno by <{Baba^Yaga}> 5 Dec 2003, 8:23 PM