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Oh, CLS? Why not mention your reasons for zeroing my work this time? hrmm? or will you just zero it and say nothing as usual? Just curiouse.
SupremeDreamer on The Morning Star by Shardik 8 Dec 2003, 4:32 AM
be interesting to hear. 9
Shardik on Winter Lands: I by http://bandgeek 8 Dec 2003, 4:19 AM
That was grooving. 9.
Tell that to a Quark Nugget.
Shardik on Saying of Love by UrbaneSavvy 8 Dec 2003, 2:20 AM
It's reak good but starts to go south especially at the last line. How about "a basis"?
Shardik on Painting the Town by dragonfly 8 Dec 2003, 2:11 AM
REal good stuff here.
dragonfly on Thankless by shadowaura 7 Dec 2003, 11:59 PM
Mirrors are too often used. Maybe he saw his reflection in something else? Toilet water perhaps?
The_Third_Isis on Winter Lands: I by http://bandgeek 7 Dec 2003, 10:24 PM
Yikes soooo glad I'm no where near any of that till after xmas I caould harly handle california..with out a human fur coat a few blankets and alot of what wet dreams become a reality. I;30 am and the warm breeze is fluttering my satin robe...sigh keep your cats warm, and thanks for the well writen reminder of why I dont like real winter's. Best wishes to you and a hot apple cider my friend cheers.I need to sleep with only one silk sheet and no dry heat,that makes my nosebleed yuck. A 10 and to all a goood night!
The_Third_Isis on Saying of Love by UrbaneSavvy 7 Dec 2003, 9:17 PM
ahhhh love,amore I've only tasted the ambrosia of this orchis/family but once [I mean the taste of love real love]it gave me asthenia.I am a godess so i recovered a bit quicker.I even lived in orcus because of it. My own creation..same birth mark distinguish from others characterize, make clear,boundary,mine. yet another century he is my bezel.Real love is eternal "Live as if you were to die tommorow.learn as if you were to live forever" Mahatma Gandhi. this touched my diamond hard heart a 9
A xmas cock-tail to beat all Quantum pressure , tall frosty glass the only normalisation factor in this concoction ahem..2 shots of bacardi rum 151 better yet will make it really elemental for this holiday season no need to invite the neighboors they will get a lil -bit wink..ahem quantro what the hell..be generous, all the stolish you want. As 33 a dash,H1 yep,He2 what the hell laugh a bit,N7 a bit expensive but why not,Pu94 a pinch of criptonite you'll fly anyhow just to be sure extra momentum now don't bother to shake, make it pretty and light it. pressureP=Boom now that's how to be a particle in a box happy reincarnation!!I'll drink eggnog with a shot of 151 hold the extras, a quantum 10
http://bandgeek on Winter Lands: I by http://bandgeek 7 Dec 2003, 6:59 PM
Winter Lands: II This winter, a new land to explore, suburban chickens peck over frozen ground. Salt water freezes on bluegreen estuary banks’ sloping glaze, as inviting as a waterslide in spite of eternal, internal struggle of salty ice. Clots of snow form on stilled river like frothing yeast in lukewarm water. Gentle spray over the dam freezes into frosty stalagmites: upside-down icicles reaching toward clouds. The traffic on Main Street comprises of privately owned pick up trucks with yellow plows attached on their way to rescue those who can pay. Shovelers relocate dense snow, one 12 x 16 x 8 inch rectangle at a time the satisfying fulfillment of metal scraping gravel struggles to be heard over obliviously aimed snowblower motors who fan their plumes of snow onto shovelers’ now diminutive accomplishments. In this land, it is so easy. Let the car hide under that mass, safety is not the certainty of an accessible city bus every fifteen minutes. Safety is hibernation behind storm windows among flannel and housecats, feeling assured, there is nothing to do out there anyway.
kingit on Eggie, Eggie, Eggie by OneFingerAnswer 7 Dec 2003, 6:52 PM
We should all learn to love a log! That's what I've notcied.
kingit on To W by kingit 7 Dec 2003, 6:34 PM
I WISH I had some dough!!!
Shuushin on To W by kingit 7 Dec 2003, 6:28 PM
Here's a nine, mr. pillsbury.
capachijim replying on Fireworks on an Open Sky by capachijim 7 Dec 2003, 6:27 PM
Fire has two, I'm sure. Fi-re. You could say it as one depending where you're from but where I'm from it's two. I wouldn't mess up on something so simple like a haiku's versing *no way*
kingit on To W by kingit 7 Dec 2003, 6:17 PM
Thanking you, while I expose my soft, white under-belly.
Are you Zodiac?
Shuushin replying on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 7 Dec 2003, 2:57 PM
This is some hilarious shit - all of it. Big thank you's all around. i thought it was a prawne.
?-Dave_Mysterious-? replying on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 7 Dec 2003, 1:57 PM
Congratulations, Sir! You have me in checkmate I fear: If I do not reply, you win the argument by default, yet if I do, I prove your claim that I am a "pre-adolescent fuckwit" by appearing so childish as worry over the afore said insult. However, I have one last pawne up my sleeve: Have you stopped being gay yet?
Shuushin replying on Fireworks on an Open Sky by capachijim 6 Dec 2003, 11:01 PM
I use it as one or two. Whatever works in my favor.