electroman1979
on On Visiting My Father by sliver
16 Nov 2003, 7:39 PM
great poem, i miss him too, 10
sad.
- labor days.
"all i ever wanted was to pick apart the day and put it back together my way" aseop rock
no, Bill. that's six letters. welcome back! where ya been?
christ!
Good stuff.
-8-
Sure, fire away.
I don't have to focus on an object I know like the back of my hand. Would you like to know about the balcony boys like the back of my hand too? Because, I'm currently writing one.
"I've never trusted women.
I've never cared much for flowers.
I'm a young man working the balcony."
A great read.
very funny you hooven hooker you. it's good to be hooven. people like hooven animals. as opposed to hoover ones. Ha!
got to be number 1
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love this one to keep up the good work
this is the tops. what a briliant mind so sereal
This is exactly why we like zinnias. they are a hearty flower that can survive winters. And they return to grace us with their beauty every spring. A tree does not hibernate. It improves its root structure during the down season. Just focus on your balcony. All is well in nature.
I thought i saw some grammar boo-boos as well. I think she has enough to start with. Let's see how she does.