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SupremeDreamer on A Truth About Mortals by Caducus 6 Nov 2003, 7:44 AM
Well- it bored me, and if this was written to convey that things are not what they seem, you could of written perhaps 4 lines at the most and spared readers from being seriously mislead. -shrug-
ShaNoN+960317485 replying on God bless your stool plop by <{Baba^Yaga}> 6 Nov 2003, 7:39 AM
in our little town Kmart means a miser... rather an peculiar understanding hence:o), But 2 say the least, this is a little FLUFFY:o)
Caducus replying on A Truth About Mortals by Caducus 6 Nov 2003, 7:25 AM
I am trying to convey that things are not what they seem but can appreciate what you are saying and will dwell on it. If it was someone who hadn't a clue i wouldn't bother - but i respect you so will.
Caducus on The Thrapper by You are a fat fucker 6 Nov 2003, 7:10 AM
Shades of dark angel
Caducus on The wild runs by ShaNoN+960317485 6 Nov 2003, 7:09 AM
full marks fo rthe use of gobbledygook
Caducus on Fathers by amielou82 6 Nov 2003, 7:05 AM
just when i started liking it i hated the next line and so on and so on- bit too preachy and a warm earl grey.
Caducus on God bless your stool plop by <{Baba^Yaga}> 6 Nov 2003, 7:02 AM
put a dash between k and mart for the english - we just think kmart is NYC street slang otherwise.
Caducus on God bless your stool plop by <{Baba^Yaga}> 6 Nov 2003, 7:01 AM
heaven is line 5
I can't begin to describe how this poeme made me feel. Mostly like breaking all your fingers so you'd never again write anything like "Today I dressed myself in rain" or "We are primates who swallow the keys of freedom/Performing for others voyeuristic preconceptions". This isn't a poem, it's pretentious guff with line breaks sprinkled arbitrarily throughout. Maybe you should try reading some real poetry by actual poets next time you're thinking of putting a draft of last year's suicide note through an autoformatter and posting it here.
ShaNoN+960317485 replying on Heart Attack by ShaNoN+960317485 6 Nov 2003, 6:59 AM
nah, not as a user. But yea a month or so back i found myself in here... Y, did i do something wrong:o),
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer 6 Nov 2003, 6:49 AM
Kiev(x) := Pulped x, surrounded by breadcrumbs, and if x = chicken, containing some white sauce that they put in the middle. Kiev() is not overloaded, as 'Kiev' is not a function, it is a pointer to a city in eastern Europe. The language describing the universe has separate namespaces for functions and variables. As for your concern about whether it should be a sausage Kiev or, perhaps, a Pork Kiev, ask yourself this: Is a chicken or part thereof actually pulped in the manufacture of a chicken Kiev?
some deleted user on On Visiting My Father by sliver 6 Nov 2003, 6:19 AM
love the poem, best one I read 2day <10>
some deleted user on The wild runs by ShaNoN+960317485 6 Nov 2003, 6:17 AM
i like this
some deleted user on Fathers by amielou82 6 Nov 2003, 6:15 AM
most ppl write about hating their father, nice to hear something good for a change
some deleted user on The hypocrisy of calling it tolerance by impert&ent 6 Nov 2003, 6:09 AM
hmm...ok
some deleted user on Heart Attack by ShaNoN+960317485 6 Nov 2003, 6:06 AM
have u used this site be4?
ho_hum replying on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer 6 Nov 2003, 2:59 AM
As fine as this piece of argument is, I'm afraid I must post the following refutation. The underlying assumption made by -=Dark_Angel=- is that an X Kiev is 'an outer shell, consisting of pulped X, coated in breadcrumbs, surrounding some Y'. This argument, however, is false. Y is not specifically declared, and thus must be global. All references to Kiev must therefore use the same Y. A sausage Kiev, therefore, is and outer shell consisting of pulped sausage (surely simply sausage meat - another logical slip perhaps; Is a sausage or part thereof actually pulped?) coated in breadcrumbs surrounding some white sauce that they put in the middle. This is quite different to a scotch egg. It is worth noting that when Kiev is instantiated with no argument the default output is a city in Eastern Europe that is neither pulped nor surrounded by breadcrumbs, thus Kiev is overloaded and the implicit assumption that a Sausage Kiev would be similar to a Chicken Kiev is questionable. Sausage Kiev may well be a city surrounded by pulped sausage. This area would benefit from further research.
baphomet on I AM THE BEST by ____________________ 5 Nov 2003, 10:15 PM
Fred Durst is just another piece of work and wastes are oxygen. And you, are an idiot who wasted my time reading this crap.
Yatasuma on i love this shit by Yatasuma 5 Nov 2003, 8:41 PM
for future reference, the '-' is silent
sliver on Saint Peggy Seeger by Retaliate 5 Nov 2003, 8:35 PM
Perhaps she's bob's mom?