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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on All Alone In A Selfish Moment by ARTIE 30 Oct 2003, 2:30 AM

Dandy.

Wobble McFly replying on The Box by EouSou 30 Oct 2003, 1:44 AM

Woke up this mornin' Closed in on both sides Nothin' doin' I feel resistance As I open my eyes Someone's foolin' I found a way to break through this cellophane bag Cuz I know what's goin' on In your mind I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box Life goes in circles Around and around Circulating I sometimes wonder What's movin' underground I'm escaping I found a way to break through this cellophane bag Cuz I know what's goin' on In my mind I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box (guitar solo) Livin' Ahh ha I found a way to break through this cellophane bag Cuz I know what's goin' on In your mind I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' I'm a livin'....I'm a livin' I'm a livin', I'm a livin'....I'm a livin' I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a box....

Wobble McFly on Love by EouSou 30 Oct 2003, 1:40 AM

Making love to a child Starts out by just a kiss I'm not sure I approve of your pederastic activities, sir!!!!!!

Wobble McFly on Megan by RaVensEternalFire 30 Oct 2003, 1:39 AM

Change the last word from "soul" to "ass". -10-

Wobble McFly on Fading Freindships by BuffysBack419 30 Oct 2003, 1:38 AM

Stunning. This piece works really well when recited in a heavy Indian accent. -10-

Wobble McFly replying on The Santa Anna's fire and red sun by Bachus 30 Oct 2003, 1:35 AM

LOLTTM!!!!!!!????????!!!!!!!!!!?>>>>>>>>>??????!?!???!!!!1111111

Wobble McFly on Who I am by Butterfly1120 30 Oct 2003, 1:33 AM

OMG LOL ASL!??!??!??!!!

Wobble McFly on Where did you go? by Butterfly1120 30 Oct 2003, 1:29 AM

Had you been "deflowered" yet?

Wobble McFly on Angel by Butterfly1120 30 Oct 2003, 1:27 AM

Change the last line to this: "God sent me an angel, I just call her Motherfucker" Such an amendment would serve to lend the poem one more layer of polytextual poignality.

Wobble McFly on The meaning of Love by The Slender Blade 30 Oct 2003, 1:25 AM

"I can accept closure, But not indecent exposure." These two lines are sheer genius. The rest is cack.

Wobble McFly on Tipspit by kingit 30 Oct 2003, 1:22 AM

This poem sounds really good when you persuade a slightly deaf disabled old man, port-sodden like so many of his ancient tribe, to recite it directly into your ear canal using a method of recitation known as "shouting".

Wobble McFly replying on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer 30 Oct 2003, 1:19 AM

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!???!?!??!? You are the biggest dunce in the whole world!!?!??!!!

Wobble McFly replying on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer 30 Oct 2003, 1:18 AM

Incidentally, I was there last week, eating fifteen sausages, twelve eggs, one hundred thousand chips, a million baked beans, and one very small piece of toast. And I saw you! Fellating the greasy Italian man behind the counter! OMG LOL ASL!?!??!?!!?

Wobble McFly replying on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer 30 Oct 2003, 1:17 AM

Ah yes! That famous monument to "St. Gile". You nonce.

Bachus on Translations by robustyoungsoul 29 Oct 2003, 10:00 PM

Lordy, you are robust. Will you sit on my mustache for a nickle?

sliver on Translations by robustyoungsoul 29 Oct 2003, 8:10 PM

I can feel this. It burns,reminders of the heat of Iowa. And the ages of Adso. I accept not failure, I scoff at mediocrity, And I allow the forge to push me away with the heat of it's bellowz.

Shardik on The meaning of Love by The Slender Blade 29 Oct 2003, 7:57 PM

Gaut in the left tit?

Shardik on Tipspit by kingit 29 Oct 2003, 7:49 PM

A brave new swirled

Shuushin replying on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer 29 Oct 2003, 7:33 PM

is that a web page? wondering why story is in quotes.

==Doylum on Love by EouSou 29 Oct 2003, 7:04 PM

Two hours of passion my fats hairy dangleberried arse. Anyone who claims to last more than 2 minutes 12 seconds is either a malicious mellifluous mendaciant, and or a blond haired worbelling geordie tosser. Otherwise this is second to none!"