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The Santa Anna's fire and red sun

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Oct 2003 · 17 comments

An eerie red filters through windows, people, pets & wild things I haven't seen the sky in two weeks The mountains that I was born under are as black as coal with a million crucifixes and lonely chimneys still holding onto something underneath three feet of ash and two hundred years of burnt pine fodder and brush. The creeks and rivers I fished as a boy run mud brown and molasses slow. A fire camp prisoner sits on a boulder overlooking the San Gabriel Valley and his possible run to freedom. But all would see his get away. Just as all can see the flame beast racing unhindered towards Big Bear. 11,000 firefighters many of which are prison inmates trained for this. Hand in hand with freemen and victims The ones that serve their time won't even be able to become firefighters in the free world due to their record. Killers against a truer killer. Rapists against a truer rapist. This fire has no heart. This wind tells it so.

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[9] abecedarian 29-Oct-03/2:54 PM Reply
My prophetic soul! Remember I was bitching about how dry lake Arrowhead was ('Lake Arrowhead' Oct 19th, 2003)?

Good capture. Even in LA it looks like the fucking apocalypse, I can't imagine being at the place where the heart of the fire would be (if it had one).
[n/a] Bachus › abecedarian 29-Oct-03/3:05 PM Reply
Mother fucking bark beetles. Here's a forecast: rain, rain, mudslide, mudslide, catastrophic results. new landscape. better fishing and camping 200 years from now.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Bachus 29-Oct-03/3:10 PM Reply
Here's a forecast for your acting career:

HBO gay erotica until 2010
Malcolm X retrospective in 2011
Premiere of Shrek 2 in 2012
Found dead with a rolled-up copy of Gilded Stumpes of Olde lodged in your ear in 2013 with a suicide note saying "KURDT KOBAIN"
[n/a] Bachus › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Oct-03/3:19 PM Reply
lol.

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[n/a] Wobble McFly › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 30-Oct-03/1:35 AM Reply
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[9] richa › Bachus 29-Oct-03/3:13 PM Reply
My forecast: the climates going to change, up or down, something to do with jet streams, CFC's.

Good poem by the way
[9] abecedarian › abecedarian 29-Oct-03/3:18 PM Reply
I like your forecast better than mine: rain, rain, mudlside, catastrophic results. New landscape. Rebuilding on new unstable landscape. Rinse and repeat.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Oct-03/3:17 PM Reply
[X] Arbitrary line breaks
[X] Shit
[n/a] Bachus › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Oct-03/3:23 PM Reply
Is this why your mad?

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Bachus 29-Oct-03/3:33 PM Reply
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[n/a] Bachus › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 29-Oct-03/4:03 PM Reply
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Or is it that the slide between your both and theirs has recently become a doggy door?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Bachus 30-Oct-03/4:33 AM Reply
Have you ever had more than one coherent thought in a row?
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 30-Oct-03/12:28 PM Reply
No, but today I had my teeth cleaned?
[9] SupremeDreamer 29-Oct-03/5:08 PM Reply
awesome, quite enjoyable.
[0] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 29-Oct-03/5:29 PM Reply
The Wind... It has so much to teach us.
[9] INTRANSIT 29-Oct-03/6:44 PM Reply
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Jolly nice