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Dave gave you a zero because he's mysterious! Like a woman's vagina.
Could you be more specific? I'm having a hard time hearing you over all of these screaming pen waiving virgins. Thanks
horus8 on To Bob, Love Ed by Bobjim 26 Oct 2003, 3:41 PM
A need to repeat yourself? Is a need to beat yourself and get doggy styled.
Your own ways, constricted rectum.
cherish replying on the abandoned sea by crin 26 Oct 2003, 8:31 AM
i totally know what you mean...been there and done that hahaha
What's my own? I got your seven right here tight ass http://www.rathergood.com/moon_song/
?-Dave_Mysterious-? on The Place I Like Best by tori 25 Oct 2003, 5:34 PM
I guess we all need a special place like that!!!
?-Dave_Mysterious-? on The Awakening by Kitch 25 Oct 2003, 5:32 PM
The other day I was just beginning this dream where me and the mebers of ZZ Top were in a train carriage, and we were on our way to solve a mystery of some sort. Then, just as I was thinking this was shaping up to be a really fantastic dream, my alarm went off. I tried to go back to sleep in order to complete the dream, but it didn't work.
?-Dave_Mysterious-? on Waiting On A Friend by Yatasuma 25 Oct 2003, 5:27 PM
I really hate it when you get a shopping trolley with a broken wheel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hopefully the person/persons you wrote this about will be casually browsing through poemranker, and when they read it they will realise just how wrong their lifestyle has been all these years. Then maybe, just maybe, they will change their ways for good, possibly to those more accurately mirroring your own.
?-Dave_Mysterious-? on turn the cameras off by crin 25 Oct 2003, 5:16 PM
Your life must be a living hell. Thank you for sharing that with us through your poetry. -10-
Hey, I know I joke around a bit, but I've decided to try and write a serious poem for once. I'm quite pleased with the result. I hope you will enjoy it too.
?-Dave_Mysterious-? replying on First Time In A Long Time by EAger to Offend 25 Oct 2003, 4:50 PM
I knew it!!! Even your comments are brimming with uninhibited emotion.
?-Dave_Mysterious-? replying on verruca by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 25 Oct 2003, 4:48 PM
You cannot thwart me with your pseudo-haikus.
?-Dave_Mysterious-? replying on verruca by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 25 Oct 2003, 4:40 PM
RE: "Cherish" doesn't work.e with the "eh" suff-ends of the first two lines. Sorry, I only accept coherent comments.
crin replying on the abandoned sea by crin 25 Oct 2003, 3:33 PM
i guess it was basically the idea of watching someone you love walk away without them giving you a clue as to the reason.
Rarely. I don't often read what you write. This was worth the side trip. I'll swing by again sometime.
INTRANSIT on My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit 25 Oct 2003, 10:18 AM
Ever had a stricture? Annoying they are. The cure is quite embarrasing. It gives you first hand experience of a menstrual cycle. minus the cramps.
Volumetric efficiency. Now, why is it not part of a book? Grappling with not becoming what you despise most I assume. Grapple on.
richa on Shadows by tori 25 Oct 2003, 9:19 AM
cute circularity, fascinating like the telletubies