horus8
on Jesus and the spider (Should have bought a GT 500 Glider) by Don-Quixote
27 Oct 2003, 3:45 PM
What's the contraction for "Ain't" Ainot? That's what I like about you. You're a loose canon. And personaly? Incest rocks.
was it inspired by ur ran over dog fido? lol...
Bobjim
on Jesus and the spider (Should have bought a GT 500 Glider) by Don-Quixote
27 Oct 2003, 12:14 PM
What an interesting poem. Did you know that Jesus was actually a spider?
nice and enjoyable, but you couldn't help but throw in a little wit, anyhow.
righteous
You see, a backspace is eternally depressed,
Submerged deep in the sanguine depths,
Of illiterate logic,
A child's voice is heard nonetheless.
--nice, very nice. Actually Dave, your humor has, in the past, inspired me to not take things so seriously.
Good stuff.
It would be mysterious, coming from someone excreted from his mothers arse.
hmmm, seems a bit dry. The laughing at funerals part has potential, but yeah...it's a bit dry. Like toast without butter.
?-Dave_Mysterious-?
replying on I have no problem with short people of color or religion by horus8
27 Oct 2003, 8:45 AM
I don't know, surely you must know your own behavior. Probably denoucing commercialism or something, or just generally being a really cool individual who doesn't give a shit about what the Man has to say.
And how many people have on poemranker have both never had sex and foregone their right to own pens? what on Earth are you talking about?
errors fixed.
can i improve? indeed- question is, have i done a job i am satisfied of? Yes, the only words presented the only fashion i feel needed to mark nathans tomb, ofcourse the future has surprises a-plenty, so maybe, maybe one day i will improve it.
but not today.
4 darks - 5 shadows...
etc..
goddamn, this is a pimple man, the repetition amazing - sizzled me into a micro dust particle within seconds.
why dont you give it a new title? such as:
jiggsaw puzzle.
blessed with 4.
A masterpiece of poo poetry.
let it drip. 10.
app. great title, i loved the way it shot out.
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(TEAR)hit home,SOB
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oh let me guess, Inspired by the time Fifi went in the car motor for heat.
4<>gj
what a great poem
was this inspired by ur ran over dog Fido .
4.ioih
Hmmm:? okay thats enough, it's very . . . well
use your imagination. enough said cheereyo
lllll. . .
baphomet
on There's a meteor showers before today's crucifixion by The_Third_Isis
26 Oct 2003, 7:03 PM
very good moth I praise you with a limited adition mint pat on the back.
10 patpatpat
i regrtet not commenting before
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