cherish
on the abandoned sea by crin
25 Oct 2003, 8:06 AM
what gave you the idea for this--->i love it
Don't be garish.
I'm better than you.
I'm sliced bread.
i like
Caducus
on Nothing beat the 90's for An over view of American culture by Shardik
25 Oct 2003, 3:46 AM
blue collar beaten. 1st half was real ass kicker.
please help me with syllable's h ! and read my haiku just posted. i have the ideas but understand women more than syllables.
My thoughts are more like drop and splash.
I cracked up when i saw it because for a moment i thought it would be your life story.
Sounds like a table full of chubby cheeked Hawaiians jonesing for diet poi.
The_Third_Isis
replying on Nothing beat the 90's for An over view of American culture by Shardik
25 Oct 2003, 1:12 AM
Originality is a lot to ask of the truth. So my son tells me you two have a history together? I'm a touch jealous.
Are you Crystal Lane Swift in disguise?
My skepticism about a poem usually revolves around what I perceive as an over-indulgence. Whether it's the use of too many inconsiderable words, or, as in this case, the over-abundant use of words which reek of a literary hauteur. My tastes run towards simplicity, an elementary, universal appraisal. So for me, the exclusion of working class sensibilities, is strictly inoppurtune.
And Miggy would know!!!!!!!
I know that place, lol (9)
Behave yourself, Senor Burro!!!!!!!
i enjoyed this poem, keep up the good work
A post- post- post- Modern Luther King Jr.
Again, you're holding back. I'm glad to see someone experiment, but as far as this lab rat goes, the prize IS the trip through the maze. This maze is nowhere, try again.
At last At last At last
You've got The Magic 3 working for you here
Don't foul it up by chanting beyond what's reasonable.
precisely.
What the hell did you guys smoke in Niagara? Was it you that jumped the falls and survived. Did you bang your head? Did you?