EAger to Offend
on rainfall saga 7 by Bill Z Bub
24 Oct 2003, 5:59 AM
Hey! This is much better. I'll bump you up to a five.
Premonition.
Interesting. The only real "puzzle" is in the title. Aside from the resemblance to jigsaws.
Certainly, if not at least an excuse to step outside and dig out.
I was hoping for slippery tan hips and less pip.
The end needs to be repaired. Would you like me to do it for you?
'And I wonder
if the thunder I hear now
is memory or premonition.'
Is beautifully put as is the opener
Difficult to write a soothing poem when the reader needs to do so much work following it.
rest in peace.
Few things with a more solid aura than weather worn oak and iron.
Gonna need help Bill. smile 1, lure 1 , fingers 2, thundering 3, rain 5, at last 8 (intentional golden section? 1,1,2,3,5,8) but that's all I got.
Yeah you like the snow now, but you'll soon have had your fill.
And we of California will be left with our eternal comfort - deprived of the joy of difference.
Maybe after not too long you'll wish you could cart it all out here for all of us to enjoy (until it melts)?
Pigs, Natty Light, and RJ. Sweet baby Jesus, I'm having a seizures from all the repressed memories you've unleashed!
interesting. Editing does not wipe out votes?
Hail! Hale! Heyll!
death season...life returns in March
Great!- must go lie down now.
Secrets
and puzzles, and
games.