ramtheman1
on Family by ramtheman1
18 Oct 2003, 2:21 AM
i miss my family that live in another state but we are still pretty close.
i was have a bad ahir day.
this was written just after my mothr passed away.
i like that show. do not put others down for something you do not like. everyone has there own way od doing and writing and it shoulb be respected and not put down.
it has a nice shpe.
nice
Let me know what you think of this poem.
I'm about to use a spanky to wipe up your silly ass. Ms? Ms? Are you trying to piss me off? I'm a woman Like youre gay. (hope yer not a fag)Still, 5
Jizzed a minnet Ms. Silver, does this mean you won't be going to the spa for a facial anytime soon? "Sick" you ask? "No respect" you ask? I'd respect you more if you didn't use a hanky. Remember what the Colonel said?
Now I see why you have 12 hits and only 2 comments. Grow up!
Youall are sick. SICK! have you no respect. Probably not.
Was "the light at the end of the tunnel" a bullet firing? Such cowardice. I liked the last stanza best, the third one leaves me wondering if you just need to get out with your consoling friends - eat some weasel, tastes like wabbit. Nicole's a bitch - get over her - get on with it. Emotional otherwise.
great poem, i can feel the emotion, keep up the good work 10
Better.
I'd prefer a Dove - a pleasurable antitheses - although I could set it afire and bring out the laces and whips - no sticks - too medieval at this point. Dave needs a "hall pass".