INTRANSIT
on Ghost of Gloaming by Don-Quixote
6 Oct 2003, 2:24 PM
sexual halloween.
if you are calling me a woman, i shall take it as a compliment.
Wow, top notch product placement. How much did you get paid sitting at your desk coming up with that one. $650? $850.
and yet you still crossdress.
yes, I ate the apple. and grew a penis.
Stop it woman, have you no mind?
your beauty is revealed when you venture out in the nude!
A little vine crown, and less bashfulness, and youd be fit for eden.
but you ate the apple.
well.. thats a good way to fart that wonderfull farmin metaphor into the stockade..
all you needed was a better title methought.. now its.. tsk.
anyway, im off to face my nightmare, known as a villanelle
THOSE seeds are growing just fine. this is about 20 clothes changes just to get out the damn door.
get a fresh bottle and drink, then. why must everything be so difficult?
way to go cowboy.
ignore me.
i suck today.
phooey!
is syntax inclusive of punctuation. i imagine so. neat. now it's cheap and meaningless. but proper.
And I love how you, of all people, have the nerve to call me arrogant. The second most pompous of all raised noises on this site. Btw, Dave, if my poetry is so terrible, why don't you stop reading it. I tire of your constant swaying on the tip of my dick anyway.
syntax can be important, you know.
amusing rhymes. but no vote.
perhaps they thought those seeds would grow.
9.
oh shush, your case of numeral zero fever isnt half as bad as mine, dreamer supreme was a like a magnet, supremedreamer defied gravity twice (he also has been thinkin himself unhuman, but thats another story)
the only fully operational brainmachine is Y2kSlamPoet, who has gove undercover along with my last bottle of Peket...
but alas, we are all soon going to complete our formula for creating "something out of nothings" - we have ventured into godly terrain, and yet we are brave (or stupid enough) not to worry.
I dont think apologies will suffice since there will aways be a soul that dislikes you and anything that comes from you, (everyone has to go through this.. )
stop pleading, dust off your jeans and start keeping your head up.
-nod-
10.
I think a pimple should be unsubtle, but still express some kind of emotion.
Flow is good, kind of like conversation
J.B. Manning
replying on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
6 Oct 2003, 10:55 AM
uh huh, riiiight. Give us some more of your ghetto suffering poetry. We haven't heard enough yet. Come on ?-Dickless_Mystery-?
*yet = site