-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Tailor Made by OnTheOtherHand
3 Oct 2003, 6:08 PM
Why not? It isn't offensive, is it?
Dear DA,
Thank you for the ten but your comment isn't welcome here. I've played the post, delete, repost, redelete game with you before. Let's not do it again.
Love,
OFA
Symbolism. It's all in the symbolism.
I'm crying, I'm laughing so hard. I didn't see the original, but this is hilarious.
This is near top-of-your-game stuff. Great tripodal balance you have with the serious/silly/outrageous. thats for you. personally.
SupremeDreamer
replying on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Oct 2003, 4:46 PM
italy, sometimes poetry does include the offensive, anti-PC, and outright disturbing writes, i wouldnt be so narrow minded.
youll find that many good poets carry some "poetry crafted to offend, shock, and anger the masses"
then again, -shrug-. but its wise to not discard anything too quickly- i learned this the hard way. :)
SupremeDreamer
replying on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Oct 2003, 4:42 PM
the ... dampened the line i think, but nice.. but this made me chuckle with delight the most:
in the corner as I cry holding my red cock
to the sky in sorrow as she slips
and fades away upon his HUGE UNCUT MAMBA
"huge uncut mamba" - perfect unveiling of the mans mental gears in action, lmao.
Do you know about the dogwood, redsea, jesus connection? If not? no, you wouldn't get it.
Jeremi B. Handrinos
replying on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Oct 2003, 4:29 PM
I rather enjoyed the part with the ass whole moon? lol.
Jeremi B. Handrinos
replying on My Show at the Whiskey a Go Go on the 26th of August 2003 by Jeremi B. Handrinos
3 Oct 2003, 4:26 PM
Yes, as frequently as possible. You write shit mediocre poetry, and have a ridiculous user name. I would consider WopCherub? What do you think?
-how a young man is lead to neo-nazism and the kkk...
jealousy and cock size can produce some interesting and unpleasant results.. heh. 8.
talent is one thing- what a poets pen hand is inspired to create is another?
joe, just something to consider:
isnt truth or falsity simply dependent on ones point of view
and how they experience life and the world around them?
etc:
is everything at face value the relfection of the poet, or an expression of whats around him?
hrmm?
I dig the ending.
Opera singer? i thought you just had a small experimental folk/rolk band (wonderfull music). Never knew this included the opera.
ah well.
some deleted user
on My Show at the Whiskey a Go Go on the 26th of August 2003 by Jeremi B. Handrinos
3 Oct 2003, 4:04 PM
You comment on your own work?
oh shush- you produce crap, so you wouldnt know quality if you snorted it straight up your nasal canals.
More cuts? i was looking for death warmed over easy. My suggestion would be Don't over use an overused style overly. 8
"death" is only a he, because you make him one in your poem. Death is not the last thing, but the least thing.
thanks.