Brittanyy
on Afraid by Brittanyy
1 Oct 2003, 6:54 PM
She died of Diabetes
Clearly you are both smelly corks bobbing in a sea of overly warmed baby brie. 10!
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ha ha ha ha, yeah, well, atleast I have the guts not to delete mine. ::AGIANTYAWN/SIGH::
suffering with inner serenity...lovely line. Not sure about the one before it though.
No, if you would have read my paragraph CORRECTLY fuck hole, you would see that I don't CARE about you liking or disliking my poetry. What I CARE about is your remarks. I value peoples comments for the sake of improvement, but after reading some of your so-called poetry, I realized that there is no improvement in your tired ass ghetto complaints. Same song, different drum, beating everyday in some tired old slum. yadda yadda yadda.
::Yawns::
These are like some sort of pseudo-limericks. 10
Sir Manning's new verse is fantastic,
It's lyrical, raw and scholastic,
I just think it's swell,
But in case you can't tell
I'm actually being sarcastic.
No you don't. You're just being a sourpuss. You just wrote a massive ranting paragraph about how utterly uninterested you were in my comments. Does this sound like the behavior of someone who doesn't care? No, the course of action more commonly associated with someone who doesn't care is to do nothing. You are eggceptionally stupid.
Practically all my poems are sonnets.
Fuck it apparently, i'm not elligable to blow you up, so just fucking go explode on your own. ARGH! blach!
Hoze thire?
You'll have to forgive my little brother. Sometimes he jumps on my computer when I'm not looking and says STUPID shit. Obviously, the real shardik, would never have said that. My apologies.
I am 5 different personas.
Precisely.
That's why I (from cow on) will be opting for the infamous 1-0-1.
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
cowboys are nifty.
Stop writing about
dark angels trite love life
noeone gives a shit