hipster flare
on ~What do I do~ by ~Ashley Baby Girl~
1 Oct 2003, 9:47 AM
I guess you should kill yourself.
Just kidding.
The imagery is outstanding. I love the closure...sweet!
hmmmm not much to say on this one. I like it.
Very funny...smart ass. And I say that lovingly. :-)
Right I hope your happy with yourself I am now unfertile; well unless I can gather up the lake of gametes under my desk and put them in the fridge before all my baby paste dies. But god that is good poetry!
i like it, somewhere there it reminds me of something, where and what idk, tho it is there >8<
If I come again my nuts will shrivel up and fall off and I shan't be able to produce anymore gametes. In the name of the lord please write no more of this sperm inducing poetry or I shall not be able to have children.
My third leg is providing a prop to my desk after reading your poetry!
I have blown my whack all over my shorts.
I literally can not stop coming.
Hey I came again!
Tomorrow I will re-read your poem and come again.
I loved his longboard in both senses of the word!
-but I don't know if it was his first gig with his band!!
Love the peace guy!!
Actually, my friend just got his wisdom teeth out yesterday, so needless to say, that slowed him down a bit.
The hallucinating man I'm talking about always wears many coat layers and a winter hat, he's probably in his twenties.
Thank you for the suggestions, I'll use them in my revision.
More bodily fluids, please.
fine squirt of ink even
add another 4 lines with the same rhyme as the first 2 , end it with 2 non rhyme lines and you have thee a sonnet !
As a poem - deluxe - the last line kind of crackles not explodes apart from that a dine squirt of ink 8
why hello museheart
got tired of writing in your xanga?
wonderfull stuff- your life is interesting indeed.
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i foudn this funnier than my line fuck poem