Joe-joe
on Nicholas Martin by horus8
12 Sep 2003, 9:34 PM
Jeremi,
Please accept my deepest sympathy. A life ended so soon is tragic. I have three children around Nicholas's age. Life is so complicated today and kids are torn in so many directions with so many expectations imposed on them. I have a daughter of 21 who struggles with depression...it can be very tough...my heart bleeds for Nicholas' parents. I'm sure your friendship was a source of comfort to him....but life can be so fucking cruel...Be well my friend, Joe-joe
I fucking love this one... and it sure beats the last time you were "inspired" by a piece I wrote. How many fucking people are floating around in that crafy little brain of yours. Like I sad to you before...I got to give you your propers... -10- (1st I've ever given)
I heard Toni Morrison say that once, too. She said that with computer writing, people don't chose their words as carefully. You know I read that Flannery O'Connor, even well into her chronic pain and fatigue due to lupus, would start her writing each day by rewriting every line up to that point in the story, then continue from there. I'd never edit if I had to write that way, but notice how succinct her stories are. Anyway, the length of my comment shows that I am guilty.
-nod- indeed. But to be more specific, im a man who loves to hear people cry out "YOU BASTARD!!!".
heh. :)
SupremeDreamer
replying on maternal-infant bonding (rejection) by SupremeDreamer
12 Sep 2003, 7:48 PM
LMAO. you are indeed imaginative.
stupinity.
But alas, you misspelled "assumption", so all the power that your poem might have had to reverse vasectomies, etc., is voided.
Yes, I can see the source of your inspiration. I don't know about "sapless sinner"- I would think of your sinner more like a diabetic with an appetite for the sweet and decadent (but he/she would request the sour, for atonement purposes).
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Crap! Utter Crap! 10
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No I don't think I'll change it.
I don't want it to be serious,
but if you want I can send you some white out
and you can do it yourself. -- scroll down...
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just kidding
thanks for the
comment, i am
still a grass-
hopper.
I am mute sometimes. But then I play the flute.
i drowned him in green sushi salsa, and my stomach still wants me to puke.
i continue to digest him anyway. But, you shouldnt torture yourself. Hey, like the sinners saloon? joe-joe inspired me.
Aeth triteeth noveltieeth.
I'm afraid to show my true emotionelles. Will you do it for me?
no,
I meant dessert.