?-Dave_Mysterious-?
on Ode to My Crack by J.B. Manning
10 Sep 2003, 2:23 PM
Maybe you should have your buttocks amputated.
Thank you, but when I edit it next, it will soar.
Hello friend, yr'e always high up there in my book too.
Thanks, I love yr work too.
It's pretty good. It's not one of your best, but it's good. Um, I don't think you can use that last line though. I think even using a single line that someone else wrote is still Plagiarism, isn't it?
I like the content, but the flow is somewhat choppy, hard to follow. Nice thought.
resurrection of the old. ITS JUDGEMENT DAY!
tomb/grave same thing.
"wishing to die"
"drives you insane".... etc. you were saying?
There is nothing whatsoever perverted about wanting to look at Razorgrin's ass.
Oops, did I just say that aloud?
Mighty. Your kung-fu is awesome.
I use the bastard English of your most tree-infested of ex-colonies. Thanks, though.
hrmm "icey tomb".. now.. where have i heard that one before?
heh, heres a 6.
I dunno, I'd like to give it a ten, but Jesus kinda messed up the dismount so 9/10 for the Christers.
Bunny, there's a world of difference between a little plumber crack and a little over half of my ass.
I've got the last of a batch of cookies here, but that doesn't help you much...
Toss in Zukav's "The Dancing Wu Li Masters" and you have the full glory of the experience. Have you read the Shrodinger's Cat trilogy as well?
No one says anything about it because they're perverted and want to look at it ;):P
I want to seduce Zeus's swan.
The last two lines just don't seem to fit with the first six.