LuckyJoe
on (limits of ambition) by richa
10 Sep 2003, 6:23 AM
Very interesting.
this poem absolutely blew me away. i'd give it a 666, but the highest i can go is a single digit.
It's impossible to stop thinking of Jesus. Just try it and he's still there; you're not thinking about Him but he's still there otherwise you wouldn't know who you weren't thinking about.
Pissing a long time ago
When I was a much younger fellow,
I left two extensions in the sand
of my even younger fellow.
tc
heh.. ive said similiar things to him before. -shrug-
well, i never liked haikus much, but this one.. its like a bad joke that makes a room go silent for a short moment.
no offense, just my opinion. blessed with 5
No dave, i don't think that I will, but thanks for yr comment. I'll keep that in mind if I ever want to design a really kitsch usewername. lol.
Which one.
Wonderful and touching story. true natural talent, from a special girl.
Well Done :)
Not exactly, this is based on a real experience.
This sounds a lot like one of those email chain letters that my sentimental co-workers send me. Is that what you were going for? I am sure it'd be appreciated in that genre.
That is great, but clean up the typos, especially if this is a serious tribute to someone.
Yikes. Hope this is fiction!
Umm... thanks.. not sure what that means though :)
I must confess Sir, I do not even know what a sonnet is!!!
I think you may have neglected to arrange all of your lines into the corrcet order. Be more careful next time.
I was hoping this poem was going to be about intimacy involving regurgitation. I was sadly disapointed. I pox be on you!
Damn...that's one good piece. I'm impressed.
mama mia
Except, on reflection, this poem must be a joke. I change my vote to a 10.