?-Dave_Mysterious-?
on F.R.O.G. by Garrett S Sexton
9 Sep 2003, 3:20 PM
Why is this site infested with so many religeous zealots? If anyone here is thinking of becoming a religeous zealot, please take this advice: read the Bible. Not just selected passages, the whole thing. Honestly, it's completely fucked up. See the verses I posted on "Jesus Speaks to Poemrankers" by Joe-Joe. I can't even give this poem the dignity of a zero. -1-
like a haggis to the back of my knee.
I take it by "pants" you mean trousers? Are you not acquainted with proper English? Nonetheless, a most arousing haiku.
Ah the days of the Principia Discordia, the Illuminatus! Trilogy, and The Book of the SubGenius. I think I read them all in one year and it blew my mind wide open.
It was bad clams, I tells ya. This could benefit from a punctuation mark somewhere.
And the champ comes out swinging, with a KO in the first minute!
I see you are one of my biggest fans.....Keep watching because it only gets better love. Thanks for being brutal with some of your comments but true talent doesn't need attitude to back it up. I have been writing for years now buddy and just because my stuff isn't structured doesn't mean I don't know what Iâm doing. We have choices to make and with expression that is mainly what it is about. HAVE A NICE DAY :)
No, the last two lines(which should also both be capitalized and I don't know why they're not) mean that although this person is only one person out of the 6 billion on the planet, they were everything that mattered to me. Of course, this is an obvious hyperbole because there were certainly other things that mattered in my life.
I wonder who she was going to recommend the already 'best poetry site' on the internet too? Perhaps her parrot? I tell you she must be a museheart because she sure isn't a museface. lol
vous touchez mon coeur, doucement, maintenant.
Oh boy! umm I'll take that and a sanewitch, pliz.
Cara mia, I want to say it for you.
Last line could be "Should this go further." Otherwise, I'll have you know. I think it's very good. As always.
Well, you know I gotta give this a ten, not because I'm Columbian, but because I'm a werewolf'e.
We slipped into sadness? Is that a reference to my poem? I don't get the connection. That isn't a verse from this poem.
There is no "Perfect Record," in time. Only or recollection of it. Write on, my friend. You have talent.
It is called "the dozens".
And why would they?
Is this a rewrite, seems like I've seen part of it before. Nice job.
Purple Y fronts with brown spots and go fast stripes at the side (but that's just me)