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Bill Z Bub replying on (untitled) by http://bandgeek 6 Sep 2003, 5:26 PM

How about 'phased' or 'do not pass go' ? :/

Bill Z Bub replying on (untitled) by http://bandgeek 6 Sep 2003, 5:23 PM

Okay, I reread it and saw that I missed the obvious. It's a talent I have.

http://bandgeek replying on (untitled) by http://bandgeek 6 Sep 2003, 5:09 PM

Is it not sloppily obvious?

http://bandgeek on (untitled) by http://bandgeek 6 Sep 2003, 5:07 PM

title ideas anyone, or other constructive feedback?

Bill Z Bub on (untitled) by http://bandgeek 6 Sep 2003, 5:05 PM

Just what did you do?

http://bandgeek on A very special thank you to a very special someone by Livvie 6 Sep 2003, 5:03 PM

Hmm. Ancestor or infant or someone else? I think the idea of Whitney Houston's "I will always love you" takes away from the piece.

http://bandgeek on missing time (revised) by Bill Z Bub 6 Sep 2003, 4:59 PM

Very nice, but changing from "she/her" to "you" was a little confusing. 9

richa on What's World Peace? by DeadtotheWorld 6 Sep 2003, 12:37 PM

I am sure much of this is true, but it needs framing better. A different perspective, something to interest the cynic

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 6 Sep 2003, 12:18 PM

Joe-joe, Thanks for your comment. I really value your opinion, even if you are a dunce. Which you are. 10!!!!

Patsy on Vest by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 6 Sep 2003, 11:18 AM

It's a big good laugh :)

http://mulberryfairy replying on Blind Faith by NNirvana13666 6 Sep 2003, 10:12 AM

Well I guess you're a better man than me, to consider it good in spite of completely disagreeing with the subject, but then, I'm not a man, and I wouldn't have liked that poem even if it had spouted atheist rhetoric.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Vest by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 6 Sep 2003, 10:10 AM

You are a prime dunce. How can you not give "portable nest" a 10?

http://mulberryfairy replying on What's World Peace? by DeadtotheWorld 6 Sep 2003, 10:03 AM

It is not paranoia, it is called the US Patriot Act II.

Joe-joe replying on Why by J.B. Manning 6 Sep 2003, 5:26 AM

And...unlike many fags....you have no artistic talent!

Joe-joe on Why by J.B. Manning 6 Sep 2003, 5:25 AM

Becuase you're a fucking fudge packer...that's why!

Joe-joe on What's World Peace? by DeadtotheWorld 6 Sep 2003, 5:02 AM

You suffer from severe paranoia my friend! If the CIA, FBI. SS....was as you describe your ass would be in shackles and you'd be boyfiend (i'll refrain from graphic depictions)to some hard core lifer at a federal prison. Please don't be offended but you write in broken english. Are you a recent immigrant, an 11 year old, or just a fucking illiterate?

Nicholas Jones on A Lovely Surprise by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 6 Sep 2003, 4:40 AM

Unpleasant. Have you ever thought that you are stuck in what Freud described as the anal-fixation stage?

Nicholas Jones on Vest by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 6 Sep 2003, 4:38 AM

Hmm. Not as good as the last one. But references to tall hills are to be encouraged.

Nicholas Jones on Where are my Spectacles? by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 6 Sep 2003, 4:37 AM

Sardonic brilliance. But surely the correct word is 'cheseemonger', not 'cheesesmith'? I hate it when I drop my glasses and I can't see them because my eyesight is shit.

SupremeDreamer replying on Boy's Hell by shadowaura 5 Sep 2003, 8:58 PM

and who might you be? ;) am i giving him bad advice? am i being unfair in judgement, or cruel in nature twards him? no.. why would it be better? does it matter either way? no. because he will always have to make a decision himself about any suggestions or opinions given to him (i hope). so why ask him to be narrow in eyesight? its best to consider all aspects, good, bad, useless, etc. dont you think?