Bill Z Bub
on When Jesus Found Me by http://mulberryfairy
5 Sep 2003, 8:49 PM
Amazing. This is a brilliant brilliant piece. I love it. Ten, ten, ten! Remembre, Jesu loves you, this I know, for the Bible tells me so.
Why is Christianity labelled monotheistic if they worship a trinity?
Hrmm. certainly different from other stuff ive seen from you. 7.
wow.. how dramatic.. lmao.. your amusing.
Hate? dark, hate implies that i intensly feel something for you, which i dont. I just like arguing with you.
Theres a game played often on the streets of East Side San Jose, where one tries to outdo someone in a contest of insults. I am doing something similiar to that in nature.
At the most, i dislike you. Thats all.
"all opinions are valid, even the invalid ones." - your contradicting yourself. Why not skip the candy coating, and just tell me what you think:
Your opinions are worthless, but mine are worth something because im christian.
see? its to the point, and would show that you have a spine.
good day sir.
SupremeDreamer
replying on Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer
5 Sep 2003, 8:29 PM
temp meth insanity can result in many interesting artistic creations. ;)
SupremeDreamer
replying on Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer
5 Sep 2003, 8:28 PM
are you a moron? looks like it.
I like it, I see now why it rates so high. kudos
I have been at the criticalpoet for awhile now, the people there give more in depth suggestion and critique, offering revisions, etc, shit like that. Not saying its better than poemranker, or that i dont get good crit here, i just like getting a wider range of opinion etc.. im trying to improve my abilities in everyway possible.
About flagging me as a wanker, "for all to see an' it move you."
what, you think i actually stole lines from a 30 year old literature magazine i have never heard of? "an it move you"
move me? what, make me leave? wtf?
Saint Screamer is 100% my own creation. i didnt take the idea or verses from anywhere but my own poetic inspiration and if you dont believe me, i couldnt give a flying fuck. what are you threatening me for? hrmm?
you're right mulberry, i do disagree, the poem was good though
i liked it, it showed good emotion, write more
so you actualy get it?
good poem,
10
you think your cute huh? yeah, the poem long and all, but sadly off the mark, i guess we disagree on religion that is for sure, i'm not gonna rate this poem at all, but thanx for the offer of getting back at you
dunce
Me neither. You and "electroman1979" might have a disagreement to talk about- see "Judgment Day".
ah, so much in so words...concise,compact. Kind of slaps you around and pins you down, i like that
a bum indeed..."i've seen what you look like under the stage paint"...that line was perfection
That comment wasn't from me, "mulberryfairy", it was from Jeremi B. Handrinos, who was having a bad day. I am rarely verbally abusive toward someone offering compliments.
Perhaps this poem could be improved if it was set in space.
its good, i like it