Joe-joe
replying on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
4 Sep 2003, 5:59 PM
All right DA is this the new math they were talking about in 1967? I find it interesting that give you give Christianity such high scores then write a poem that focuses on Christian condemnation of a Muslim. If you were setting out to "reflect Christian values" you should have focused on mercy, justice, love, and forgivness for these abound in the Christian faith. Maybe we have more in common than you think because I too score the faith a perfect 10 out of 10. Peace.
I agree with you Joe-Joe. ?-Dave_Mysterious-? needs his head checked. Fancy that? A Christian making a ridiculous statement. What utter tosh.
There's no such thing as a wrong opinion????? What the fuck are you talking about? Stay away from the open chemical containers..they wreak havoc with your mind!!! You call yourself a Christian then make such a ridiculous statement....Oh there's no such thing as wrong and right..it's all a matter of opinion!! What the hell did Christ die for....divergent opinions or sin? Grow a spine.
Jeremi B. Handrinos
on Outliving the Alphabet (say goodbye to abecedarian) by Retaliate
4 Sep 2003, 5:50 PM
Happy Birthday, and stay in touch.
Well, I know 'come' has been used thus spelt, but then it just seems silly, because the immediate reaction is 'What the devil is that verb doing there as a noun??? Oh, wait a minute... considering the context... oh, I get it.' 'Cum', on the other hand, just reeks of really bad porn.
The last line's quite good, by the way -- the dream bit, that is.
A steaming portion of Dung Po, I daresay. *chortle*
A staggering wok of manure.
Yeah, you are a 'genis' too. Stupid fucking idiot please learn how to spell genius if you are going to even bother putting the effort behind your daft assumptions.
And by know means is this anywhere near the best poem on poemranker. people just feel obligated to give it a high mark so that they won't be labled 'prejudice' you trite hack.
I was torn on that. I couldn't decide whether 'come' was actually 'valid', or if it was only, properly, 'cum'. Finally (as you can see) just went with the word I was sure of.
Geez, that was like Schindler's list on Zoloft. Complete forced fiction and ridiculously intentional pointless guilt trap crap. 6
My best friend has no skin, so what, who cares? Really? You? Go march for your guilt trip, because i could give a shit. There are so many more important issues occuring now adays that are more pressing then this shit. So 6.
A work of staggering intellect. 10.
I'd like it a hell of a lot more if the word 'Cum' never appeared. 'Come' I might forgive, but never 'cum'.
A line break does not a comma necessitate.
No good, but it's great fun.
The second line has to be the worst grasping for a rhyme I have seen in my life.
genius
It seems dreadfully snarky to quote you something you once said to me, dear Tilde, but...
"i'm awash in the imagery, but it's a tsunami".
I can.
But if Judas hadn't betrayed Jesu, then Jesu would never have died for our sins. If you ask me, Jesu betrayed Himself. And that's why He had to die on a cross wearing that nappy thing.