Horus will love this. You just can't put the man down and he bleeds olive.

As always your writing intrigues. I had a problem with line 2 its a bit of a flow killer. However the way you used lizard was good, though they tend to turret their eyes other than move due to their prey instict. The best for me was where you went with the message and your strength for me has always been that you have a strong beginning, middle, and end, a depth in words yet with a clarity of expression. 8

weightless

must you always begin your poems this way? it's arresting

Sweet child, interesting experience. LOVE

Sweet child, interesting experience. LOVE

Sweet friendship, but, isn't this a perfect example of how we're set up to not be close with the ones we love?

I have roaches in my building, for the first time in my life. Some have, like, twenty legs, long antennae, and spots. I would describe the roaches.

and after you "climb into her nestbed" ??

Did you have a cleaning on the same day, after finding her in your closet?

I wonder what a dream dictionary would say about this one! I think it shows courage and a lot of empathy to carry the dead fox into the woods. I wonder if you were feeling like the dead fox?

I mean, deep connection for hurt?

Is it possible you were mistaking the hurt for deep connection?

I'll have to look this up in a dream dictionary. Do you feel a resemblance to these characters? Interesting that the cat played such a significant role in your awakening. Are you guys enmeshed, or what?

I finally got this poem, after reading it today. I've read it several times before, without catching on what it meant. This time, I could picture the poet (pre-stretch marked) mimicking their movements. I imagine this is a part of the poet's self that she mourns, but in all actuality, never lost.

This edges something of a marriage, to me. I would say: Just (ours).

This edges something of a marriage, to me. I would say: Just (ours).

blessed with 7. enjoyed reading it.