thepinkbunnyofdoom
on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme
7 Aug 2003, 2:14 PM
lol. You really do seem to have been studying under Horus. -10-.
Joe-joe
replying on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme
7 Aug 2003, 1:38 PM
Yo Dreamer,
Listen I have to go to work.. That's right I have a job. Can't relate to that huh. You've been alot of fun. I really enjoyed it. You're actually a pretty bright kid....but so imature and so confused about life. You really should consider getting some help. When you grow up I'd be more than happy to help you out. I can kind of relate to where you are. For the record I did not threaten you with physical harm. I am a peaceful man who, in my younger days did enjoy kicking ass...and did it quite well. But that's long gone from my system. I was just pointing out that you need to be very careful about how you approach people and the words that you use. I hope you're not stupid enough to talk face to face the way you do here on the net. I know that you're a fucking idiot but I do think you understand the concept of self-preservation. I'm sure you're really just a obnoxious coward.. so you;ll be ok. Like I said. I wish you the best of luck and hope that peace finds its way to you. You can do amazing things with your life if you're properly directed. Peace, Joy and eternal Happiness......Affectionally yours, Yo-yo
DreamerSupreme
replying on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme
7 Aug 2003, 1:30 PM
Oh, and btw, your going to have to play chess with casper aight, cuz i got shit to do, so keep on fightin! PEACE!!!!!
DreamerSupreme
replying on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme
7 Aug 2003, 1:21 PM
I couldnt stand up do to laughter.. look, your talking about getting physical with me over the net, and we just barely met, cmon now, i dont swing that way, and if i did, i dont bed wrestle on the first date.
Plus, you have been around the corner more times than i can count so, in the words of Dark Angel: YOUR AN AIDS INFESTED HOMO!!!
Yeah, when your no longer amused with your self healing masturbation to bandaid that gun shot wound in the center of your forehead, ill cock smack you and tell you about my collection of rubber snakes.
It takes a steady hand to pull the cock
against the strain so determined
to have its way
Who will grab the cock?
Who will toke the snake
so we can all get out of the car and jerk ourselves off for a fucking change?
Joe-joe
replying on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme
7 Aug 2003, 1:14 PM
Yo Dreamster,
I did not give you a zero. I actually thought your work had a bit of wit to it. I really don't mind. I find you amusing. No doubt you're a punk who couldn't stand up face to face with a man like me, but thats OK. We all have to deal with things from a place of comfort. As for me "falling into your trap" I've been around the corner more times than you can count. I'll take this little game as far as I'd like...when I'm no longer amused I'll stop playing. Peace my witty but crude little brother
A Pimple Infested Suicide Note
The Modern Day Teenage Emote
Jump Off The Boat
Into The Sea
SWIM WILLY, SWIM WILLY BE FREE!
Get That Underwater Submarine Degree
Go On That Crusade
God Knows You Paid
Tons Of Shrimp Just To Fade
Into The Deep Blue Abyss
Oh Jesu How I Will Miss
That Neurotic Navy Submarine Torpedo Man
He Was Rocketed Into A H20 Space Adventure
2001 Leagues Under The Sea, A Loser Odyssey
DreamerSupreme
replying on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme
7 Aug 2003, 1:02 PM
OMG!!?!?! your giving me little baby blue zeros!!! how cute.. you really are pathetic.. cmon man, no sense of humor?
Good Job!.. im still waiting for a better title, but screw it, heres a nine. hey, wutcha think of my attempt to do a horus style parody?
DreamerSupreme
replying on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme
7 Aug 2003, 12:53 PM
WOA... "FEEBLE MIND?@?!?!?!?!?!" im devestated.. jim, pass the clit and lets inject more meth.. hey, why dont we inject the yo-yo here with meth and make him spin us a sandwhich?
I love that goodbye of yours: peace.. when your starting a war, like an idiot.. doing exactly what i want you to do.. your as predictable as a fly that flies into a bug shocker 2000.
crack, pop, sizzle, ima make you into my breakfast of rice crispeys.
Horus would know. Check it out now.
Not much of a lady if she's playing with yours, is she? :)
Joe-joe
replying on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme
7 Aug 2003, 12:50 PM
Yo Dreamster,
This is "Yo-yo". I'm really happy you were able to free yourself from all of the stress I've placed on your little tiny shoulders. Here's a little advice your feable mind might be able to understand...if you don't like what I write don't read it you fucking asshole. Peace.
oh yeah.. pregnant, Surrounded.. you know, horus once told me a story about the difference between a mature poet and a street poet.. the gist of it was that the street poet cooks up his work in a quick rush, making an eggs benedict cooked in the shell.
The mature poet takes his time in perfecting his work, making sure it isnt a new age hardboiled egg hes dishin out..
http://www.spellcheck.net/ <- this shit works..
misery.. btw, the use of the enter key to perhaps shorten the length for each verse would make it neat, and easier to read, also more comprehendible (if done right)
other than that, its a very good captured emotional image. not sure about the last two lines though.
I think the title sucks.. need a better one.
overall: 8, perhaps a nine with clean up and better title.
DreamerSupreme
replying on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme
7 Aug 2003, 11:29 AM
simply put, i just fucking hated that piece of shit he wrote, along with the other crap he posted.. so i said fuck it and thought id attempt to do a parody in the famous horus8 style.
I made myself laugh with this thing.. made me feel a thousand times better.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme
7 Aug 2003, 11:26 AM
Well, well... Look who's evolving? Nice parody. My favourite was the cheese seats, personally
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8
7 Aug 2003, 11:23 AM
ditto
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8
7 Aug 2003, 11:02 AM
Thank you my cuddly pink master at arms. Wish me luck, at noon I'm pitching my first big movie script for the BIG check. After all, one must buy one's time when one loves poetry at all hours these days, buy the time and space, one of the only positives of the almighty dollar.
abecedarian
on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8
7 Aug 2003, 10:53 AM
nod