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lol. You really do seem to have been studying under Horus. -10-.
Yo Dreamer, Listen I have to go to work.. That's right I have a job. Can't relate to that huh. You've been alot of fun. I really enjoyed it. You're actually a pretty bright kid....but so imature and so confused about life. You really should consider getting some help. When you grow up I'd be more than happy to help you out. I can kind of relate to where you are. For the record I did not threaten you with physical harm. I am a peaceful man who, in my younger days did enjoy kicking ass...and did it quite well. But that's long gone from my system. I was just pointing out that you need to be very careful about how you approach people and the words that you use. I hope you're not stupid enough to talk face to face the way you do here on the net. I know that you're a fucking idiot but I do think you understand the concept of self-preservation. I'm sure you're really just a obnoxious coward.. so you;ll be ok. Like I said. I wish you the best of luck and hope that peace finds its way to you. You can do amazing things with your life if you're properly directed. Peace, Joy and eternal Happiness......Affectionally yours, Yo-yo
Oh, and btw, your going to have to play chess with casper aight, cuz i got shit to do, so keep on fightin! PEACE!!!!!
I couldnt stand up do to laughter.. look, your talking about getting physical with me over the net, and we just barely met, cmon now, i dont swing that way, and if i did, i dont bed wrestle on the first date. Plus, you have been around the corner more times than i can count so, in the words of Dark Angel: YOUR AN AIDS INFESTED HOMO!!! Yeah, when your no longer amused with your self healing masturbation to bandaid that gun shot wound in the center of your forehead, ill cock smack you and tell you about my collection of rubber snakes.
It takes a steady hand to pull the cock against the strain so determined to have its way Who will grab the cock? Who will toke the snake so we can all get out of the car and jerk ourselves off for a fucking change?
Yo Dreamster, I did not give you a zero. I actually thought your work had a bit of wit to it. I really don't mind. I find you amusing. No doubt you're a punk who couldn't stand up face to face with a man like me, but thats OK. We all have to deal with things from a place of comfort. As for me "falling into your trap" I've been around the corner more times than you can count. I'll take this little game as far as I'd like...when I'm no longer amused I'll stop playing. Peace my witty but crude little brother
DreamerSupreme on The Final Say by Nightmare-Poet 7 Aug 2003, 1:13 PM
A Pimple Infested Suicide Note The Modern Day Teenage Emote Jump Off The Boat Into The Sea SWIM WILLY, SWIM WILLY BE FREE! Get That Underwater Submarine Degree Go On That Crusade God Knows You Paid Tons Of Shrimp Just To Fade Into The Deep Blue Abyss Oh Jesu How I Will Miss That Neurotic Navy Submarine Torpedo Man He Was Rocketed Into A H20 Space Adventure 2001 Leagues Under The Sea, A Loser Odyssey
OMG!!?!?! your giving me little baby blue zeros!!! how cute.. you really are pathetic.. cmon man, no sense of humor?
DreamerSupreme replying on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7 Aug 2003, 12:59 PM
Good Job!.. im still waiting for a better title, but screw it, heres a nine. hey, wutcha think of my attempt to do a horus style parody?
WOA... "FEEBLE MIND?@?!?!?!?!?!" im devestated.. jim, pass the clit and lets inject more meth.. hey, why dont we inject the yo-yo here with meth and make him spin us a sandwhich? I love that goodbye of yours: peace.. when your starting a war, like an idiot.. doing exactly what i want you to do.. your as predictable as a fly that flies into a bug shocker 2000. crack, pop, sizzle, ima make you into my breakfast of rice crispeys.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7 Aug 2003, 12:53 PM
Horus would know. Check it out now.
Retaliate on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7 Aug 2003, 12:51 PM
Not much of a lady if she's playing with yours, is she? :)
Yo Dreamster, This is "Yo-yo". I'm really happy you were able to free yourself from all of the stress I've placed on your little tiny shoulders. Here's a little advice your feable mind might be able to understand...if you don't like what I write don't read it you fucking asshole. Peace.
DreamerSupreme replying on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7 Aug 2003, 12:33 PM
oh yeah.. pregnant, Surrounded.. you know, horus once told me a story about the difference between a mature poet and a street poet.. the gist of it was that the street poet cooks up his work in a quick rush, making an eggs benedict cooked in the shell. The mature poet takes his time in perfecting his work, making sure it isnt a new age hardboiled egg hes dishin out.. http://www.spellcheck.net/ <- this shit works..
DreamerSupreme on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7 Aug 2003, 12:28 PM
misery.. btw, the use of the enter key to perhaps shorten the length for each verse would make it neat, and easier to read, also more comprehendible (if done right) other than that, its a very good captured emotional image. not sure about the last two lines though. I think the title sucks.. need a better one. overall: 8, perhaps a nine with clean up and better title.
simply put, i just fucking hated that piece of shit he wrote, along with the other crap he posted.. so i said fuck it and thought id attempt to do a parody in the famous horus8 style. I made myself laugh with this thing.. made me feel a thousand times better.
Well, well... Look who's evolving? Nice parody. My favourite was the cheese seats, personally
Thank you my cuddly pink master at arms. Wish me luck, at noon I'm pitching my first big movie script for the BIG check. After all, one must buy one's time when one loves poetry at all hours these days, buy the time and space, one of the only positives of the almighty dollar.