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Retaliate replying on Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate 7 Aug 2003, 8:10 PM

If you hit us, the you deserve it for tailgating down the one lane highway to oblivion. :)

INTRANSIT replying on Looking down by INTRANSIT 7 Aug 2003, 8:05 PM

I cheated with the lunatic fringes too. god I suck at this.

http://mulberryfairy on Looking down by INTRANSIT 7 Aug 2003, 7:10 PM

I think the words "indecent" and "proposal" can never again be used next to each other. The rest is good.

http://mulberryfairy on Duet by rusty 7 Aug 2003, 7:09 PM

Yikes! You need to get back to the safety of floors. I enjoyed it.

http://mulberryfairy on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7 Aug 2003, 7:05 PM

I like the image of god's highrise apt. with pictures of kitties. Couple of typos: "She get(S) many calls still but enjoys other's (should be others') misery"

http://mulberryfairy on blue lilac and I (edit) by richa 7 Aug 2003, 6:44 PM

Great. But yeah, like INTRANSIT said, the trombone? The trombone is such a circus instrument, makes it seem like this moment is going on in the background of a cakewalk. Is that what you are going for? The tone doesn't seem so jolly as to call for a trombone solo. That is my only complaint, 10.

http://mulberryfairy on Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate 7 Aug 2003, 6:35 PM

Your bodiless head reminds me of Futurama. Workers of the world unite.

http://mulberryfairy on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8 7 Aug 2003, 6:30 PM

How could you fictionalize birthday trauma? On a nonfiction note: On my 11th neglected birthday my parents forgot me at the YMCA after closing hours (with their phone off the hook until the janitor had to give me a ride home at the hour of 10 o'clock.) It is too painful to even attempt to rhyme. Sniff.

http://mulberryfairy replying on Definition of Hypocrisy by Retaliate 7 Aug 2003, 6:16 PM

I mean, http://www.votetoimpeach.org/

http://mulberryfairy on Definition of Hypocrisy by Retaliate 7 Aug 2003, 6:14 PM

Rhetoric, yes, but I like the contrast you've laid out for your readers: says this/does this. www.impeachbush.com

http://mulberryfairy on Yellow Cake for Everyone by Retaliate 7 Aug 2003, 6:11 PM

"W knew where exactly where the cake was"- You have an extra "where" in there. I like the idea, but you know the army is getting sick from depleted uranium, too, so I think "army doesn't care about uranium" is a little harsh, since most of the army is made up of normal, working class people, not the people who make decisions about uranium.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme 7 Aug 2003, 5:37 PM

This has to be one of the most sickening comments I have ever read on poemeranker. I have been trying for months to parody this sort of attitude in my comments. Alas my endless battles to obtain some kind of stupid "maturity award" I invented, combined with the hours spent prattling on about how special I think I am and how immature everyone else is, has left me hanging wistfully in the breeze like an old man's nappy. If indeed you are joking, then I feel I must congratulate you on your devastatingly accurate portrayal of a top-notch dullard. Unfortunately, you aren't joking. You're a total fucking moron. Anyone who prances around the place like a total arse, constantly bragging about having "been around the block", and smuggly felching out these bum-crushingly spasticated comments, with their "oh so telling" put-downs "casually" interspersed with vomit-inducing "you'll be ok" banter, as if you're some sort of amazing "been around the block" father-figure, but at the same time so desperately aloof that you sort of float around the place in a giant kleptomasturbatory entrepoid shaped like The Fonz, has to be one of the worst stains ever to have been defecated on this utter toilet of a website.

http://mulberryfairy replying on Angel by abecedarian 7 Aug 2003, 5:28 PM

It is definitely the way you've presented this angel, with her fragile limbs and her glowing skin, that is creepy. If I did a word association with "angel" I would probably say "fat baby", because some toilet paper commercial would come to mind.

INTRANSIT on blue lilac and I (edit) by richa 7 Aug 2003, 4:55 PM

...angered by salmon.... but it doesn't fit the tone of your piece. I'm green with anchovies.Sorry, dont like the trombone. another instrument maybe.

INTRANSIT on Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate 7 Aug 2003, 4:50 PM

Go ahead and hit the brake. Just let me change lanes first.

thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7 Aug 2003, 4:41 PM

haha, bravo. Touche, and Thanks for a new Idea.

LuckyJoe replying on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8 7 Aug 2003, 3:36 PM

Smoke your pipe... hmmm whats in that pipe. I know some crazy poetry comes about when its the weezer in the pipe. *looks around with blood shot eyes* "Dude... (forgets what he was going to say so just sits there and laughs)"

rusty replying on A Circle Starts with C by rusty 7 Aug 2003, 3:02 PM

glad you think it's ok, but the point is that it leads nowhere. The action is useless, there are no true emotions.

rusty replying on The Smell of Wolves by rusty 7 Aug 2003, 2:40 PM

prawnes yes, cause I'm sure it wasn't poets

Retaliate replying on Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate 7 Aug 2003, 2:25 PM

you know it's difficult to be known as 'Retaliate' and not... well... retaliate for this offense, but I'll just save my breath on this one. ('toke the snake' is good, though)