Bachus
on Blind Walk Into Poem Ranker by DreamerSupreme
1 Jul 2003, 3:19 PM
Charming.
priceless
This poemmy poem poem would actually make a nice 2-10 minute animation if done right.
I like 'winged rats for as they seem'. Very old school construction (old like Will Shakey, not like Run DMC)
I had a friend who once a year burned everything that made him sentimental. I never asked him if he burned his spit pies. Do they burn?
(must be a nice collection of memories)
An old woman sits on a park bench watching people pass by. She smiles as she watches a young skinhead walk by with his radio blaring some heavy metal song:
DUN DA DA DUN DA DA DUN DA DA NAAAA NAAAA!
(It's "The song of choice" coopted by the fascist, or so Peggy Seeger tells me)
How am I to place you in a nice neatly numbered category if I don't know what you are saying?
We need Tagalog for Dummies!
(at every sunrise we must all use a dictionary)
Oh well, points for speaking a language that I can't translate well enough to criticize you.
lol
What might possibly be the moral to this story you ask? If you wait to
long life may pass you by. If you give up too soon you might miss it.
More than likely what your looking for has been right beside you for
awhile now and you have mearly been missing it. But most Importantly If
your stupid enough to wait on a cliff side for a few years only someone
as FUCKING NUTZ as you are is gonna come move your dumb ass.
Oh all right but just for you Horus. Say bye bye to the nice little explaination. Bye Bye.
This is by far one of your best, I would lose that "people move away" entirely, and end with a period after "things change".
Jesus, right when I think your poetry has hit rock fucking moist stinky lightless bottom, you holler out "China or bust", and start digging again. Amazing.
Why would you put that last paragraph in? Are you so insecure you need to explain yourself explaining yoursef? Good God, it was fine up until that stab at humor.
i kind of meant stigmata to do with the burning red to black. The kind of violent language, the tight skin
What an utterly repugnant and pathetic attempt to force your sexuality on us. May I respectfully suggest that you refrain from boring us all with your drivel and bugger off somewhere else. I have no problem with nancy boys but militant homosexuals are another thing now please for the sake of this reputable site leave forthwith.
Your scoundrelizing this great site.
i think you can be gayer
Oh pooh ! I was hping this would be about anal penetration , hey anytime you want to chat i'm usually in the chat room at about 8pm English time.
Curiously humorous.