SupremeDreamer
on shadows of love by crwncka1
28 Jun 2003, 5:38 AM
Well written indeed. Blessed with 8.
lmao. oki doki. blessed with 8.
Happy to help anytime when possible. ;) Indeed, it is amazing how one little word changes a sentence remarkably.. the more I proceed with improving my skill, the more I notice that little things that I once considered irrelevant or unimportant are the secret keys to turn shit into gold. heh.
Wish I was too, lucky bastard.
Actually, they hang a weigh quite a suspending palmful, it's to warm out here for them to be hanging around (rigid) up there.
Enlighten me, I'm sure I'll be impressed.
KagatoSan
on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Jun 2003, 6:33 PM
wow, now this is Much better, Love the theme. haha, atleast it doesnt have "I fucked my sister" in it. lol , srry if i was being harsh, but just, fucking your sister? THat's messed up. Nice... !10 for this
Great methodology, but you are still all tits.
miss/mrs/ms/mr/doctor/lord/lady etc etc etc girard, if you put poems onto this site it is for them to be criticised. If somebody says it's shit then it means they don't like you. If everybody says its shit then it means its shit. Learn from this. Try to listen to what the other tits on here say. Sometimes they'll say something useful.
1) Please stop rhyming love with above, you've done it twice in this poem and in all the others of yours that I've bothered to read, the fact that I bothered to read them says something in itself, namely that I can't belive that they are all going to be exactly the same. Unfortunately they are.
2) Quit with the sonnets, it pisses people off when people try to do something clever. No, it pisses people off when others try to do something clever but fail miserably.
Having said this I must also add:
Shardik you are a twat. Don't bring paedophilia into this. There are plenty more 'poets' who do that on here and it's too sick even for me. Hey but before I go you should check out the dead baby joke website.
Q: What's more fun than swinging a baby round on a clothes line at 200 kph?
A: Stopping it with a shovel.
I want to say that all of you are tits. The poem sucks too.
That's what they want you to think. Then Bobjim takes you by surprise and what happens next is a once in a lifetime experience. Because you shoot first.
Stow it dude.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Jun 2003, 12:52 PM
One should eat and sleep when one binges to insure a rational state of understanding not vice versa. Unless, you despise yourself that much then carry on.
I amaze even myself these days. Ah life is good, Yes, it doesn't get better than this.
A cold bowl of shoup and sheeze toast. So antihumor I didn't even bother to shake my head or my cock. I just flushed and left.
It's neither it's British humor, which ranks right up there with buying a duraflamelog from a Dot head at 711.
I assure you, no one in America gives a flung fuck about you, him, or her, or India. Channel 4 (nbc) in the states is loved by the multitudes because it caters to niggers, wiggers, and chiggers by the Jews for the Jews , period. Go wank on that Earl Grey.
Barely, unfortunately, and since I've gained two hundred pounds, MIA.
We should do a whole show using these parodys, a mel brooking tribute to the "It's all good" and "Whatever" generation of American teen fucklings. Complete with exploding puppy poop and Gameboys.
Stephen Robins
replying on -=Dark_Angel_Is_No_Longer_Funny=- by wEdible Underpantsw
27 Jun 2003, 4:52 AM
You are an arse.