OneFingerAnswer
on -=Dark_Angel_Is_No_Longer_Funny=- by wEdible Underpantsw
26 Jun 2003, 6:08 PM
I never found him to be funny. Chalk it up to creative differences
F/u
Don't be what?
Geez man, don't be, so was I.
I thought about it and I think I like the v more. Ode? Really? Ok. I'm not too good with the styles any way.
Thank you very much for your vote. I'll try and remember about the 'beautiful' thing...unfortunately sometimes my mind gets stuck on one word. Definitely need to work on that.
(BTW- I'm a she lol)
-=Or_Gold_Panning_With_A_Mule_Banning=-
Keep it all, its dandy. (and besides your so methodical I bet you its all been sorted prior to it being on here
The opening line sounds like a voice over for a chick flick so lose that, Stanz 2 is the most interesting and I wanted more from it and it left me a bit frustrated for I see you have the potential for possibly a grandoise work.
Sorry I wanted to 8 or 9 this but it needs more to it. ^6
And the point is?
The clattering of my hooves are recognizable to a mole's ears too, the poor blind creatures. I fear the hoe has made quick work of the sunning little devils.
Are you Poet and know it? this has his distinctive hall mark of castigating put downs.
I found English teachers about as accessible as wading through glue, yet it made one laugh a little so 6 tank tops for you.
The horror, may the reciept turnip.
A chipper poem indeedy.
Formulaic, yet I applaud the end it was impounding. 6
Was the commute getting to you?
"A broken man stands alone in a field. The cool breeze billows pleasantly about his shining groin. He turns, naked, and walks into the distance. To follow would be folly; we can only stand and mourn the loss of the darkest of all poetes."
This did bring my teeth to the front of my lips however.
Not bad my boy but one cannot help mourning the use of 'beautiful' , you should only use this word as an introduction or crescendo or else overusing it makes it a tad cliched.
Maybe if I just pull it
against my wrist
without pressing down
the urge will go away
The stanza above is your strongest.
Thank you for obliging me with your effort.
My vote: 6
Good day Sir
MUHAHA...perfect
I too have just been shafted at the craft market for what i thought were a set of Royal Gloucester china tea cups, alas they are made in Madagasgar.