SupremeDreamer
on Twenty Cigarette Burns Ago by DurtKL
25 Jun 2003, 3:36 AM
Sad, yes it is when women do such things.
We would be in a world with alot less stupid things to laugh at... I think that would get a little boring. Ah well, not all teen poetry sucks.
what the fuck is this, rerun of poetic failure? miserable and without any taste.. humoristic? fuck no man, what the hell.. hillbilly poetry folks, welcome to the next millennium.
What, No Tylenol?
Reading this istead, unfortunately.
lol. wtf.. ok whatever lol.
"Love is like a piece of gold
Hard to find, harder to hold"
What?! You can find gold at Wal-Mart! And it's really not that hard to hold, you just put it on your finger! Don't just write it because it rhymes, it sounds so...6th grade English class.
Well, now that you mention that, go all the way to 666 and call it resurrecting Papan the redux.
As in "A mature poet always checks his spelling, pro-bob-lee".
Aint that right.
Oops, you are getting rusty. You mean "probably".
Very original question, wouldn't you?
In the process of chopping it into a series, I wonder if it would be a good idea to make it into 6 parts, with the messages to maman and papa as part 6.. any thoughts anyone?
sounds like a good idea :) I'm not one to hold a grudge - you've apologised and that was all I really needed. PoemeRanker will be a better place with you in it. Even if we did argue about things, I know you now realise that while a sense of humor can be important, being mature is the most important thing.
Indeed, beautiful work.
Good, so i hope theres not going to be anymore senseless arguements, and we can all get back to the art of imagination and language. ;)
Apology accepted.
Ofcourse. I forgave my mother for her sins.. i can certainly get over past clashes.
yeah your probibly write. Hey, lee: if you said you were going to ignore someone, would you ever change your mind?
No, i wouldnt jump off a cliff if he told me to. But since i heeded his advice, i now have a title that was better than the last ones i had.. his advice did indeed point me in good directions. ;) Perhaps it just pisses you off that I heed his advise along with others and not yours?
Nope. But his advice resulted in a title that is alot better than the others i had before it.. im quite satisfied. Maybe your pissed i didnt let you advise me of anything eh?