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replying on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Jun 2003, 9:09 PM
hahaha
Please do both wrists with vertical cuts. Preferably two for each wrist and six inches long a centimeter appart angling in toward one another centered over the artery. Use a new straight razor to insure the maximum sharpness available for the deepest cut. And take a blood thinner like aspirin an hour before. Carry on.
Pop it, then let it dry like any other zit I suppose.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Jun 2003, 7:14 PM
What, are you my sister, or would you like to be? Man. Asl?
Go fuck your own sister. Leave mine alone dick nose. Lest I whip you to death with about 1,000 IQ points for hours. I suggest you bark up another tree KagatoSanFransisco. Or I'll mop the bath house with you.
Lol. Please shutup you twit.
You sound like a fucking computer dork on a caffiene buzz going.
how deadly blee bloo blee look at me. Shut up.
Just shut the fuck up. Good god, I've never seen such idiotic chatter. This isn't even a poem, or a joke, It's nothing it's boring, it's stupid, and it says absolutely nada. Like a Mcdonalds shake that's been in the back of the car all summer, crap, crust, crud. Stolid to the max!
Yeah, wow, this is a much better edit.
Man, WTF?
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus
25 Jun 2003, 6:00 PM
That's because I'm everything, everywhere, always, right now. Do you know who Dark angel is? I do. You know that Queen's of the stone age album? Songs for the death? Listen to the very end of song 13, it's a hidden song called. LOL! you will find it amusing, trust me.
The begining and end were brilliant, the middle liked a specific climax to why it all went that way, but that's not always a bad thing, here,8.
"one stared world war two
while the other forced gulf war two"
This is what I love about poetry! The utter incompitence involved in making sense. Good job, Nolan. Now, back to my fruit rollup and crossword puzzle. hmmmm,4 down, starts with p, four letters. Another name for a Medevil times bard? Any Ideas? I know it's not plum or prom or poop so. what do you think?
in your own mind, I'm sure you are.
The title should be.
Wheatgerm works.
Thank you, I didn't want to saturate this too much in imagery as the subject matter was not quite so emotional as in 'The Blooding' or 'The Order Of Things', I wanted to merely convey a sense of memory to something that was sweet in my life, ultimately something that moulded who I was as a lover, rather than a victim.
Thank you for reading it.
the aquarius and not interested rhyme rushes the poem along well
i think you use very quiete rhymes which gives this a gentle quality
not as much vivid imagery as in your other memory poems though
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Jun 2003, 10:39 AM
And now a moment of silence... Okay who want's pizza? lol
Lincoln was a REPUBLICAN!
"ShOID dIe"? "SHOID die"? What fucking planet are you on? Perhaps instead of whining about other people's poetry you should get off your fat ass and write something readable yourself. Then when you're the top poet on this site you can be an arsehole and we won't mind.
Here's a better one:
"ILlItERate pOEts ShoUlD DiE" (Free verse) by poemwanker
Little arseholes
on an undeserving site
Writing something
to piss off others
Show it to us
Who really couldn't care less
Where would we be
If we let -=Dark_Angel=- pilot the pirate ship?
YEAH YOUR WRITE LET ME KNO OF NE MOR MASTAKES OK? HYUK HYUK ASL?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Jun 2003, 4:18 AM
You monumental fucking retard. You blither about all over the place, worshiping that cad horus8 and bombarding everything he writes with praise... and now this. Guess who <{Baba^Yaga}> is. Yes, that's right. <{Baba^Yaga}> is horus8.
Gutted to the max.
hrmmm. you have a long road ahead, yes yes, just dont run out of gas, and make sure the engine sees a mechanic, perhaps oil change would improve performance
and why is the left blinker broken? -pulled over-
I bless it with 5