god'swife
replying on Goddess of the vineyard by INTRANSIT
13 Jun 2003, 8:33 AM
Once a life has been entered, it is there for eternity? Sounds deep, please explain.
My brain hurts. wow. Poignant at the end but difficult to follow at first, put me off a bit. That "'Gap' cap" thing you do at the beginning there is also a big turn off. Do you really need it? Can you make it, I don't know, more... I don't know. I think that line just needs to go. I'll look at it again later.
Overall I thought it well written.
mornin'. and yes, you, all of her friends. I have found, that once a life has been entered, it is there for eternity. whether the soul is concious of it, or not.
battling the atrophy of a learned response culture.
So are there other Goddesses? Maybe you should write about all the Gods involved? (In touch with me?).
yes, she is only part of the vineyard, not the winery. and she did.:( I pray she keeps in touch with us all.
oops 8
I was rarely in class but I have stormed out of auditions once or twice. 7
Nice enough but the punch you packed was short of winding me 7
Disgustingly enjoyable and witty. I will give you an 8 if you promise to seek therapy over these golden showers.
thepinkbunnyofdoom
replying on Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom
13 Jun 2003, 3:21 AM
lol. You're right. Golly Jeepers, 9:00 pm Thats WAY too late for me Mister! All the other stuff you said is really non-swell and I wish you wouldn't say such naughty things. You've corrupted my Virgin Ears, and Mommy says if sees you behind our White Trash Trailer, shes got a sawed off shot gun and a bullet with your name on it(I thought she was Kidding too Mister but then she showed it to me).
thepinkbunnyofdoom
replying on Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom
13 Jun 2003, 3:10 AM
Close but still no cigar, This isn't written in about being a teenager.
Bachus, is something up?
Yes, I agree Tina, now hold me my little terrorist, love me.
loquidy? Bravo, may I put a picture of Mao in?
Glad to see a "decent" poem, at last!!
When they're ready she just walks away? Are you sure?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom
12 Jun 2003, 7:25 PM
Yes, how could an adult ever expect to understand the mind of a teenager? They just don't know what it's like!
lol. You're right. Good god you are the pinkbunnyof doom. I mean, yeah, I had my doubts but never again this is indeed something I will never understand (at least not while you're in earshot) I'm sure whe you're gone though... We'll bust this fucker open like a pinata and analyse your horribly obvious flaws, such as mouthing cock and touching your bum (when you're asleep we'll talk behing your bunny trailor). Which will be at 9:00 pm I imagine from the parental rating on this poem of rated (T) for toddlers. Don't you ever attack, or get passionate about something pink bunny, I mean for the love of piss! bring the DOOM not the loom?
No. Japanese "RPGS" have a wretched tradition of inserting "ae" in everyone's name. It makes the fuckwits who play them feel like their characters are magical and special because they have "ae" in their name.
God I fucking hate console RPGS. They're not games. They're just really shitly-animated cartoons with no plot except "Boy wakes up, saves world, says '...' 200 times, has a special relationship with his special girl friend who also says '...'", and playing it is just pressing a button over and over and over and feeling strong and powerful and special because your characters' numbers have increased.
Games where your 'stats' increase are for dickchins who can't actually improve at games so they have to simulate it by making their characters 'improve'. Thanks!