sir_heff
on Techno Whore by hotwire
3 Jun 2003, 6:19 AM
I LIKE IT
lmao....shutup man ur a wank! i read ur poems and they r not meaningfull at all so shut ur mouth....how do u know i didn't write that as a child? even still in the eyes of some i still am a child...you have no idea about my life whether my mother has passed on or not so fuk up! its people like u who annoy ME thinking you know everything you know shit all! so keep ur nasty opinions to urself.
wow. great work. 10.
This I love
I like it
fag.
I really enjoyed your unacceptance of the past-tense, and your depiction of the word 'meant'. Really, it was captivating.
Indeedy.
Yeah, pretty drunk.
I love Thomas Ligotti. Actually, I just started reading his stuff, but I'm definitely enjoying it.
That's funny. Thanks for the email trickster, the other day. You're right it's been a blast, and to me worth every hour. Thanks for your critiques. I think I'm drunk or just gay now, but what the fuck right?! This sight has really taken my writing further than I would of ever thought plausible, and in the long run, as someone that needs writing more then anything else I believe. I believe that in itself to 'be' the real 'gift' behind Kaolin Fire's poemranker.com whether it was -=Dark_Angels=- sheer fucking brilliance, or Zinnia's eloquence, Settles insanity, or God's wife's passion I was there, you have Intransit's courage, Razorgrin's wit, Katie nievity, Nentwind's insomniatic chirpings, Beel Z bubs anectdotes, and Beakism's beak I was there, motherfucker, deal with that. I read poetry sixteen hours a day. I am a poet. I am crazy enough to say that with a sneer of contempt, and pull out my cock an piss on your shoe with a belch, fart, hello. Poemranker gave me the armor encased penis to do a thing that brazenly superior. People say, "how did you find the time? "I think" how couldn't I find the time?" I'm a writer, that's what I do with my time. I write as much as I fucking can; That's all I'm good at, and, as with everything else on this accursed planet, sometimes I aint even good at that. Poemranker is a good place to bring up your kids, trust me, I know, I live here.
Yes, the homerun of shit was splendid, really, in the end, I think you've taught me more than anyone, and I mean that as only you could truly understand on a purely homosexually aloof level. Of course, you know I love it when you correct me. It stirs within me a hardness, a tension, a flare if you will. A ping in the cosmic pong of that which is behind your bent logicistic need to be, "THE DARK ONE". It's only fare, you understand, our relationship is purely parasitic. I fear, in the end, I will have sucked you dry oh lonely master.
I happen to know the difference between congratulations and congradulations though, and that is special to me in my own little world, James.
Good lord I think you've done it. Let's just say this poem redefines American poetry, thankyou, now I can die completely ruined and lonely. Could you possibly shove a peanut butter kiss right up my ass? Thanks. If you meet some resistance , fear not, that's just vipersna trying to breath, ignore and push harder.
Whatever erotic energy you might have built up in the second verse is utterly destroyed by the fact that the last word is "CUM".
Razor scars, how powerful and sublime.
Very Good.
not yet. but it's still trying.
Yeah, but I was in rehab anyway. I thought you were getting your boink on in South Africa? Did your brain ruin this love affair too. Shame, I bet it died (him as in spiritualy towards you). I mean did. lol.
Crap now you tell me!!